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Bill 58 (page 45)

The other shoe has dropped.

Cw for the upcoming pages: There will be fighting, though nothing specifically hateful is said (every hit is above the belt), and there will also be a shut down moment. I’ll include more specific warnings as we go but the actual content of the fight is not disturbing.

Remember that my goal is to write a happy story where the good guys win in the end, we just happen to currently be in a dark spot of that story! There will be hugs and cuddles again, the boys just need to work for it a little. Relationships are tough, even in the best of times. Stay safe, hug your partner, drink lots of water 💕

Bill 58 (page 45)

Comments

Oh dear ...

Vala

Money. Money is always one of the big stressors. Until you learn the hard way how to talk about it and deal with it it’s a powder keg

BlueBaggins

Here it comes 😞

Atelerix

Can i ask how long will the fight go? How many pages i mean? I'm so sorry for both of them. This will be terrible 😖😣

Dominika Beregi

Song mostly lives off Mansa’s income, but does have an allowance and money he makes from performing. It probably would have been enough, however Mansa enjoys decorating the home and usually foots the bill for any decor. The painting idea was probably both of theirs!

Whiteley Foster

Ah that’s what I figured. Those kind of fights feel the worse because after your head has cleared, you just know the turmoil came from yourself and not any tangible action the other person did.

Glissando365

Does Song have an allowance so that *he* could have written the check? Or is the amount too large for that anyway? And whose idea was the painting?

Tina Rhea

To be really honest Mansa is already just completely overwhelmed. When we’re frustrated, and exhausted, and stressed we don’t make the best decisions (like Song in the proposal) we’re all people who make mistakes…

Whiteley Foster

I guess we’ll find out in the next few pages but what exactly did Mansa want him to do? Not pay the guy for work he already did? Or is there some version of timing your checks so they don’t bounce in this world? Either way, I can see why this isn’t just going to be a scolding and how Song is gonna get frustrated too

Glissando365

Aw, Bubba! He didn't know he shouldn't do that!

Em

It’s not unheard of but definitely common, usually only when Mansa is out and Song needs to pay someone who comes to collect. He should have asked since mansa was there, but he’s also not exactly in the wrong.

Whiteley Foster

He looks so innocent here he has no idea what's coming 😭😭😭😭

Michelle Garcia

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu *Two days later* uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu *So much later that the old narrator got tired of waiting and they had to hire a new one* uuuuuuck....

Ace Of Tales

So true! Also, I imagine that picture as the Vintage Egyptologist inspired one you did of Song in that gorgeous outfit! ✨

litlgreenleaf

Oh, Mansa. Song didn't know. *bites nails nervously*

Res Judicata

Relationships really are difficult. I have stayed by my gf's side through hell and back this past year. There have definitely been many dark moments but the good times always outweigh the bad and that's what matters. When bad things start becoming the norm is when you gotta be careful

Kyle Rose

He looks so sweet here. Is using Mansa’s checks something he’d normally do?

Clare

*puts on helmet*

YamiKakyuu

He really does!

Marta

😿

rippingoffmyface

I know these next few pages are gonna SUCK. But as a quick aside- song looks so cute! His whole face is just, I'm loving this expression.

Neil K.

I gotta say, the shading on Song is phenomenal!

Hannah Barnes

life is hard, unfair and cruel like this sometimes, this makes their story feel even more *real* and relatable, but oh, bracing myself for real now 😔❤️

sick_pineapple

Oh no 🥺

riekoe

distressed noises

Ash S.


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