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Bill 58 (page 56)

This is the final page of Bill 58, but Old Habits picks up exactly where this one leaves off, so I’ll start positing it ASAP!

I know this is really upsetting to see Song go back to Elon, but please know that what happens in this next story is so important to Song’s character development as well as the plot of my actual story! (And as a small but comforting spoiler the two are never romantically involved again, I promise!) Old Habits will actually have an action/adventure theme and will hopefully move very quickly, and most exciting it will have a happy ending!

In the meantime if you have any questions let me know!

Bill 58 (page 56)

Comments

I look forward to meeting Georgie!

Ashfae

im so in love with this story!! and i know this was answered before but i can't seem to find it, could anyone please tell me the order of mansa and song's storyline? i'd really appreciate it <3

claudia martin

You know I really appreciate how you hint about what sort of content will be in your upcoming stories and panels (the "it will end happy/unhappy!" and "the fight only lasts for 5 pages!" and "tw: *whatever the trigger is*") it really gives me anxiety if I don't know *how* unpleasant a story will be. I'll still read unhappy plots, they're interesting and important! I just like being warned so I can be prepared for it.

Happy Hives

Infernals have very strong claws that they usually sharpen. They can do a lot of damage which is why when Mansa first saw Song in patch job he assumed another infernal had cause his injuries. However they can also be sanded off to give a much more human appearance, something that Song did while he was dating Elon, since his ex hated how they looked. (Or at least that’s what he said, I think it would probably be because Song having any kind of defense frightened him)

Whiteley Foster

I don't know of this was asked before: Did he choose to wear his nails long or does all infernals have such long nails? I must confess, I don't remember if Melody has such long nails. I think your universe is fantastic and big and special. You're fantasy is such an wonder, never loose it ❤️❤️❤️

DieRothaarigeFrau

Uuuugghh. I saw this coming the second Elon left his card with Song. I didn’t want it to be true, but alas! In other news, is anyone else slightly miffed that the comic titled “Bill 58” only has 56 pages? Because I am and I’m trying not to be.

Nichole Hayden

I’ll be honest, at first I didn’t think I would become so invested in characters that weren’t GO-related. But the more of their story and world I learned about the more interested I became. Now I adore them and look forward to learning more and more, and root for them, and feel bad for them, and even sometimes feel protective of them lol in the sense that I just want them to be happy and healthy. It’s pretty pathetic of me really lol

Katharine Wallin

I'm with you there. I have to remind myself they're characters, not real people. Whiteley can dump all kinds of shit on them and nobody's truly getting hurt. We get so invested in them, don't we?

Res Judicata

Noooooooooooo Aw damn it :c I keep remind ing myself their story has a happy ending and everything is important to their growth as characters 😭🥰💕

Katharine Wallin

Song's definitely going to end up doing something illegal, isn’t he? ☹

Atelerix

Yay! I've been hoping for a book.

Atelerix

There was an incident that I haven’t talked about before! Things had been souring between the two of them for a while and Song was very unhappy, but he officially left after he saw Elon hit his inferna maid (Georgie, she’s a sweetie and she’ll be in the next comic). They fought after that and Song left, needless to say Elon was furious.

Whiteley Foster

I definitely will 😊

Whiteley Foster

I’m gonna fucking cry Song bby nooooo :’(

CanadianCaptain

What was the moment that Song knew he needed to leave Elon? Or did Elon leave him first? Sorry if these have been addressed, it’s been a while since you started posting their story and my memory isn’t great.

Ana

I would to. 🤑💰Take it!! Lol

Rhelana1 .

💔😭💔

rippingoffmyface

Just gotta remember that they end up happy and safe and together and have a precious little one and… 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Ash S.

DISTRESSED NOISES NOOOOOOOOO

Ash S.

Have you thought about putting all the Mansong comics together in a collection when they're all released and selling it on your Esty? Because I would 100% buy it.

That Podcast Queer

You are such a master storyteller, and it is honestly a testament to your skill that you have given us these brand new (amazing) characters and gotten us so fully invested in the even before the main story!!! Even through the angst and heartbreak I am loving every single frame of this!!!!!

Christina Clare

The only thing that keeps me going is knowing that it will end well!! But boy I don't know how to prepare myself for what's to come, Bill 58 tore my heart apart🥲♥️

Marta

Probably something green and ornate 😃

Whiteley Foster

Really hope Song uses this experience to become a total badass and can actually feel better about himself

Cj

Mhhhmmm. Any carpet?

BigBadCat

Well it’s just the library, so three walls of books, one with a large floor to ceiling window, and then the final wall has a fireplace 😊

Whiteley Foster

If... If he hurt him I'm gonna kick his ass so bad 😡🤺

Dominika Beregi

So I’ll be biting my nails all October…😬

SH

Hello again! Would you please describe a little a room where they were fighting? What objects could be there, next to abacus? Vase, plate of apples, coffee table maybe? What kind of curtains on the windows? Ummm... there is absolutely no reason for those questions 🙄😇

BigBadCat

this part of their story really does feel very big on character development and exploration, and I like it, looking forward to the next step of their journey ❤️ sun feels much warmer and nicer just right after the cold winter and awful storm, and they really deserve this *sun* afterwards ❤️ but oh my, watching him ring this damned bell now is so hard... 😔💔

sick_pineapple

... shit ... :(

Vala

Seeing the boys happy and healthy is wonderful (and the end game) but... you have to torture the cinnamon rolls! So please continue to rip our hearts out! You do it so well!

Caren


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