Old Habits (page 21)
Added 2021-11-03 10:42:14 +0000 UTCAgain I do apologize for the slow pace here! If you’ve got questions (about anything, not just this page) please feel free to ask below!
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Did Mansa end up going outside to meet Song?
Little0cean
2021-11-04 06:04:34 +0000 UTCYou’re 100% right, that was the picture I drew!
Whiteley Foster
2021-11-04 03:29:53 +0000 UTC"library during a storm"? Was that the picture you drew... not too long ago (how does time work?) or is that something Song does occasionally, showing up in the rain to spend time with Mansa?
catididnt
2021-11-03 23:52:17 +0000 UTC*bites nails*
Ashfae
2021-11-03 22:35:10 +0000 UTCAh he’s heard whoever is behind him. Good lad! Those ears come in handy eh
Clare
2021-11-03 21:31:10 +0000 UTClittle ear flicks ♡
Cj
2021-11-03 21:05:12 +0000 UTCDefinitely tension building. I've been enjoying the pacing.
katpiercemusic
2021-11-03 20:40:55 +0000 UTCThe tension you are building is amazing and the overall spooky/sketchy vibe is amazing!
Luca Valentine
2021-11-03 15:59:51 +0000 UTCI live for the little tail and ear flicks. 🥰
Tiffany
2021-11-03 14:41:56 +0000 UTCThe suspense is killing me!!
Katy Werlin
2021-11-03 14:27:52 +0000 UTCOoh, are those shadowy figures I see outside behind Song?? He was being followed...
Horizon
2021-11-03 13:18:50 +0000 UTCThis is so soft 🥺 I love these boys so much. They deserve all the happiness!
Little0cean
2021-11-03 13:18:28 +0000 UTCI'm suddenly afraid Song will get locked in!
Atelerix
2021-11-03 13:03:05 +0000 UTCAfter patch job, that was only their second time seeing each other (but to be fair yeah Song had already fallen, and continued to fall when Mansa helped him)
Whiteley Foster
2021-11-03 12:34:09 +0000 UTCDid Mansa fall for Song before or after the Patch Job incident?
Bobla Blubb
2021-11-03 12:29:39 +0000 UTCIt was much sooner for Song, initially Song was kind of on a quest to be with everyone he could get his hands on after Elon, and that was his plan for Mansa. But pretty much as soon as they started talking he realized he wanted to be with Mansa… like forever. Mansa’s realization was a while later, after they’d been dating for a bit (but before their first time together). It was definitely more gradual, but the nail in the coffin was Song showing up to the library during a storm while Mansa studied and demanding Mansa come outside because he missed him. (But it was more of a “well damn… I think I love him”)
Whiteley Foster
2021-11-03 12:15:04 +0000 UTCAmazing! I haven't been bored a single page, as others have noted, you are building tension expertly! One of my personal developments has been to stop saying sorry so much, the first step being tracking how I often I said it. It's a LOT! It's also made me aware how often others do as well, particularly women. There's the ingrained Canadianness of it (for me) but also the ingrained minimizing of ourselves that effects many of us. So that's my long winded way of saying please don't apologize for telling your story at your pace. You're absolutely brilliant and I'm constantly in awe of what you create, at the pace you create. You're a friggen badass.
Foo Fer
2021-11-03 11:57:04 +0000 UTCBecause I’m a sap: When was the moment when Mansa and Song realised: “Oh he’s definitely the one”?
Little0cean
2021-11-03 11:45:03 +0000 UTCI love this ballsy string bean.
Lemaris Designs
2021-11-03 11:27:15 +0000 UTCOkay that’s marginally comforting EXCEPT FOR THE “YET” 😭😭😭
Ash S.
2021-11-03 11:17:21 +0000 UTC🖤
rippingoffmyface
2021-11-03 11:06:18 +0000 UTCThe suitcase it actually what Elon gave him 😊
Whiteley Foster
2021-11-03 11:02:42 +0000 UTCI forgot to say that I suspect we may be seeing the 'ghost' person very soon.... are they in there, perhaps?
Bobla Blubb
2021-11-03 11:02:11 +0000 UTCA wax seal on an envelope! It’s all good! Don’t worry (yet)!
Whiteley Foster
2021-11-03 11:01:48 +0000 UTCOH NO IS THAT BLOOD ON THE BOOKS
Ash S.
2021-11-03 11:01:13 +0000 UTCThis isn't a slow pace! You are building up the tension, and at the same time showing us many things in each picture. Like here - inside the vault, there is a table with an open book on, and something red... makes us wonder who is supposed to read that! Are somebody kept in there, or WILL somebody be kept in there? (aka Song)? I didn't miss the ear flip - he is definetely hearing someone... coming after him? Will he be locked in there with that book, or is someone in there already? And what is in the suitcase.... is he carrying his own survival kit, aka food/drink in that box? Veeery suspicious here....
Bobla Blubb
2021-11-03 11:01:12 +0000 UTCoh, a whole room in there 👀👀👀
sick_pineapple
2021-11-03 10:43:48 +0000 UTC
