The Proposal (page 22)
Added 2022-06-07 11:06:18 +0000 UTC… everybody’s going to be sad for a bit but I promise this story will get us right into the main plot! And oh my goodness what a trip it is to think about that!
I never expected you’d want to read this story, not in a million years, so just getting a few likes on it makes my day! Thank you all so much 💕
Comments
I just joined, and I love Song! Ears and tail are so expressive! Love your work. I need to learn to navigate the beginning to end and Blair is helping me.
Mia Cavanagh
2022-06-08 00:21:41 +0000 UTCElon looks cute here. He's not cute. He's a menace. He needs to stop looking like that.
Res Judicata
2022-06-07 17:47:10 +0000 UTCNooooo baby bean!!! This shows his insecurities 🥺🥺🥺
Robin Reeks
2022-06-07 16:23:47 +0000 UTCI JUST NOTICED THE SHORT NAILS!!!
Robin Reeks
2022-06-07 16:22:32 +0000 UTCOh god Song no
Skree
2022-06-07 13:05:50 +0000 UTCRight??! It’s off-putting since it’s so out of character for Song’s usual choices, and with no idea why!
AJ
2022-06-07 12:56:50 +0000 UTCThat's what I wanted to ask it totally threw me off seeing them so short!!!
avery (ineffable critter)
2022-06-07 12:52:02 +0000 UTCYou’ve crafted a masterful story with rich, compelling characters, Whiteley! I adore each and every twist and turn this story takes, and am eager for more!!
AJ
2022-06-07 12:42:57 +0000 UTCWhy are Song’s nails short again??! Did Elon make him cut them?? Song never cuts them down that far by choice!
AJ
2022-06-07 12:40:07 +0000 UTCThis is unsettling. But, I know things will be better. I adore your story and beautiful art! ❤️
Kat Holtz
2022-06-07 12:35:30 +0000 UTCAnd I can’t believe this isn’t “the main” plot. It’s been amazing watching these two grow.
BlueBaggins
2022-06-07 12:33:59 +0000 UTCOh noes! Seeing Elon sympathetic makes me so nervous. Snakes on both sides (probs a bit harsh for Thomas but you get it)
Rachel Thorpe
2022-06-07 12:03:40 +0000 UTCI’m waiting with fascination for the new scene where Mansa comes home. It’s presumably no longer the “Yay, I’m promoted, let’s marry *kiss*” you originally drew.
Linnea Dodson
2022-06-07 11:55:10 +0000 UTCUm. I’m completely invested in this story and these characters. Have been for some time now.
SH
2022-06-07 11:37:34 +0000 UTCPoor babies 😭 I just want to hug them. No wonder they don’t talk about their problems. With so little time together they want to use it to recharge instead of fighting. Also shut the fuck up Elon. You stabbed your Ex do don’t pretend to care all of a sudden. Does he actually care here? He looks genuine.
Little0cean
2022-06-07 11:31:52 +0000 UTCoh, spending time apart most of the time is a bad factor... 😔 I feel like the way they disconnected in this time is so very deep, they really needed to sit and talk for a LONG time about everything, and it's just so hard on both of them 😔💔 and you know things are REALLY bad when the only person you confide in is you abusive ex and current abusive employer... 😔 honestly, I'm very grateful that you decided to broaden "Proposal" and your main plot with thorough backstory, bc it really brings all the characters' perspectives on the table, and now I REALLY want to hug all of them and pay for everyone's therapy (except Elon and that higher-rank police enforcer, they can go to hell) and I feel like we understand the whole story much better ❤️
sick_pineapple
2022-06-07 11:21:16 +0000 UTC"Your ears disagree..." made me shudder. What a slimy wankpot.
Jem
2022-06-07 11:17:43 +0000 UTCYou have no idea how invested I am in these characters lol gimme gimme more *grabby hands*
Victoria
2022-06-07 11:17:19 +0000 UTCI just want to give Song the biggest hug 😭 Poor love.
Ash S.
2022-06-07 11:13:01 +0000 UTCLook at those ears 🥺
AppleBrownBetty
2022-06-07 11:10:31 +0000 UTCI mostly like and lurk, but I just wanted to tell you that I am LOVING these stories. Your characters are fantastic and wonderful, your storyline relatable and heart wrenchingly hopeful, and that’s to say nothing of your lovely artistic abilities!
Lady Laird
2022-06-07 11:10:12 +0000 UTCOh don’t tell the guy that *stabbed you* that your boyfriend isn’t home most nights, Song!
sparksearcher
2022-06-07 11:07:48 +0000 UTC
