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The Proposal (page 51)

You’ll notice a lot of small changes in these upcoming pages, but the biggest is just how much softer Mansa and Song are with each other. They’re So different than they were when I started but I’m happy with where they ended up!

The Proposal (page 51)

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Oh. This version feels so much more fleshed out and characterized. And now that we're all good and emotionally attached it's time to rip our hearts out. 🥰🥰🥰 Ow.

Ellen Pauline

It nice and horrible to have seen them happy and together. It makes why the break happened so much worse

BlueBaggins

I love to see these little changes, they show the growth that you and your characters went through 🥰❤️

Marta

Ahhh I’ve been so curious to see what changed in these panels and now they’re finally here!! The dialogue is basically the same sentiment but with undertones of SOFT and I love that.

Glissando365

That SMILE

Ash S.

Oh my gosh, so much softer! I think I remember that before Song was like, I’m enjoying that you came back, and made Mansa stand in the rain like a sassy bitch 😂

litlgreenleaf

Like we say in french « ouinnn 😭 »

jeanni

Aughhh the art is so gorgeous though.

Ashfae

That was also my first thought when reading this 😭

Little0cean

Dear god no if they’re softer that means Song leaving is going to hurt even more 😭 But also look at Songs smile 🥺 What a nice surprise to see his boyfriend home.

Little0cean

I love them like this ❤️ they were entirely new characters to us back then, and now that I remember previous version the dynamic between them changed A LOT, and it's so beautiful to see ❤️ it was great already, but feels more genuine and loving and caring now, maybe part of it is just us knowing them better too ❤️

sick_pineapple

Gosh, it's gonna make it hurt So. Much. More. When Song leaves.

Neil K.

I'm learning a lot about story telling following you.

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