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The Proposal (page 73)

With every page I draw I just keep thinking “Song doesn’t need to do it this time does he?” but the whole plot hinges on his actions here! Hnnnnngggg…..

The Proposal (page 73)

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*SCREAMING*

Ashfae

I know he has to do it but it’s hard. Change is hard and growth is hard. They’ve got a better relationship in this version but they still aren’t communicating

BlueBaggins

Please go cuddle Mansa back under the covers, Song 😭 I promise you’ll feel better in the morning 😭

Glissando365

He's going to tell Mansa to go back to sleep, isn’t he? 😭😭

Atelerix

😭 Is it like he gets the chance to secretly see what his leaving has done to Mansa, but Mansa never gets a glimpse of him in those 4 years?

Lana_Fox

I agree with having a "what if" episode to give us strength after it all goes wrong 😭😭😭

Michelle Garcia

Wisdom and seeing how much he hurt Mansa

Whiteley Foster

It seems here like Song is persuading himself that if he can become an infernal scholar, he could come back and be with Mansa and be found worthy by his high council colleagues. But later it seems like he plans to never come back because he's hurt Mansa too badly? Does something happen to cause this change or is it just wisdom coming with time?

Lana_Fox

The arm hold though! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Katy Werlin

Mansaaaaaaaaa 😭

Ash S.

😭In this version Mansa is going to blame himself even more for not noticing something is wrong.

Little0cean

The way he holds his elbow...

catididnt

I totally understand where his "future" decision comes from, but AAAHHHH, THE HEART BREAK IS REAL, this time around MUCH more than in the last version 😭💔 and seeing him try to fight the thoughts REALLY leaves my stupid heart hoping even "knowing" how it "ends" 😔💔 but at the same time, I do so love the idea of Song focusing on himself and having this journey of self-exploration and growth and everything, so to say, I really love your idea for the plot that follows, though it does hurt both of them SO MUCH ❤️

sick_pineapple

He might not HAVE to but I can understand why he still would 😭 he is very not ok. And this go round he probably knows better how this will hurt Mansa which probably just adds to the guilt and helps keep him away until he has to come back. I know he knows Mansa believes him to be worthy just as he is, but sadly that doesn't mean he is capable of believing it himself yet poor guy 😣

avery (ineffable critter)

If only he was strong enough to admit how he felt... But we sometimes need to go through the bad stuff to come out on top, and we know Song has a long journey of discovery ahead...

Cj

No Song is not ok 😭

Pears

No he doesnt need to do it! He could just go back to sleep and be happy for once 😭😭😭

jeanni

Oh Song. Stay with him. Fuck Elon and his manipulative ass.

Dominika Beregi

No, no he's not! I know they get a happy ending, but why do they need to go through such pain first 😭

Arctic Rose

Could we please have a whats if version. Pretty please 🥺

Jenna Pateman

Change the plot 🥺 save our hearts 🥹 don't do it song :(

Emma Atkinson


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