Mansa and Song (Chapter 1 | Page 19)
Added 2023-02-24 12:12:00 +0000 UTCI can’t tell you what to means to have you gremlins reading this story! When I posted that wip I never ever thought you’d be interested, and now two years later you’ve made it possible for me to actually start it! Thank you so much!
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Angry Dad’s are scary, but angry Grandad’s are a death sentence because many grandad’s out there have no self preservation and Raine just made himself a target. 🤣🤣
Stephano
2023-02-26 15:17:31 +0000 UTCOh so Thats Charles granddaughter! Got it 👍 I don’t know if that makes Charles more dangerous or less. What’s worse, an angry dad or an angry grandpa 🤔
Little0cean
2023-02-25 18:56:06 +0000 UTCYou guys are on the right page for sure! Charles’ daughter was around Mansa’s age (maybe a year or two older at the start of the story) … it’s entirely possible given the timeline that she could have a child around 13/14 by now 🤷🏻
Whiteley Foster
2023-02-25 14:24:11 +0000 UTCI think that’s her little sister. If I remember correctly he had a drawing of said daughter next to the witness report we saw in Nerve. And that daughter was quite older. I would say around the same age as Mansa and Song. And I think her name wasn’t Lucy either.
Little0cean
2023-02-25 11:37:08 +0000 UTCSo romantic 🥰 but I hope you’re also a good sprinter Raine! 😮 This is such a rich and interesting world, I remain thrilled to see it all unfolding. Very glad to be here ❤️
Nicola Coxon
2023-02-25 08:06:10 +0000 UTCNow would this be the same daughter that saw Elon hurt Song, and/or who Charles offered up to Mansa for some rehabilitative species-appropriate courting? Or is this girl too young to have been that same daughter? Because that had always struck me as a weird thing for Charles to suggest, but which I had just written off at the time as “bigots have some weird ideas about sexual propriety and ownership”. But if that daughter *also* was showing signs of having a romantic interest in internals, then that would shed some interesting light onto why Inspector DBag might think to suggest “try dating my daughter after you graduate from Hetero Camp.” Maybe he was hoping to convert more than one Mixer with that move
Nicky Lee
2023-02-25 03:22:02 +0000 UTCI’m ducking hooked. I neeeeed it.
Catherine Clare Page-Vanore
2023-02-24 19:25:59 +0000 UTCI could easily see both being written as either. I think I also lean more towards Mansa being Alpha, only because of his job, as I could see this society being shite and limiting what Omegas are allowed to do. Although Song as Alpha and Mansa as Omega could throw up some very interesting stories. Or even both being Alphas, inter-race, same gender and same dynamic, scandal!
Jenna Pateman
2023-02-24 16:57:36 +0000 UTCAwwwwwwww! Thank you for sharing this world with us!
Atelerix
2023-02-24 16:51:49 +0000 UTCOkay I’m genuinely not sure who would be alpha and omega between Song and Mansa, but I’d lean toward Song being O and Mansa being A… most times! I think Etty would be alpha and Thomas would be beta though!
Whiteley Foster
2023-02-24 16:51:14 +0000 UTCRun baby run!!!
Robin Reeks
2023-02-24 16:25:46 +0000 UTCAwww the ears 😭 Poor Raine. Instant regret 😅 I hope they manage to get away from this unharmed. You’re welcome! The story and it’s character grew so close to my heart. Seeing a page brightness my day every time.
Little0cean
2023-02-24 16:03:38 +0000 UTCWe read it because it is an amazing story with really interesting characters. You have built a really in depth world that we want to know about! Came for the Good Omens, Stayed for the ManSong. Random question: If this world had A/B/O dynamics, what do you think everyone would be? (Sorry, if you don’t like A/B/O)
Jenna Pateman
2023-02-24 15:18:22 +0000 UTCThank YOU for sharing it!!! It’s an honor to watch this incredible story develop ❤️
Ash S.
2023-02-24 14:55:33 +0000 UTCI suddenly want to see a game of poker between internals with just all of their ears and tails giving away all of the tells. Song would especially be so bad at it
Nicky Lee
2023-02-24 13:33:17 +0000 UTCAww, Raine. From suave to baby in one glare. And thank you so much for sharing Mansa and Song with us. I honestly can't imagine what my life would be like with out them (and you) in it. 💜
Neil K.
2023-02-24 12:38:05 +0000 UTCawww, Raine 🥺💔 and thank YOU for sharing this story with us, it's been and continues to be an absolutely amazing journey ❤️
sick_pineapple
2023-02-24 12:22:50 +0000 UTC
