Volume 1 Cover Reveal!
Added 2023-07-11 20:27:18 +0000 UTCEdit: Okay how about now :D keep the feedback coming!
The cover for volume one! Whatcha think?
Comments
AHHHHHH!!!! /positive
Midnight-Radio
2023-07-12 19:48:02 +0000 UTCSo pretty!!!!!!
Deedeefl0wers
2023-07-12 16:26:23 +0000 UTCOh it’s BEAUTIFUL
Ash S.
2023-07-12 12:37:35 +0000 UTCOoo
Tarek Giver of Cookies
2023-07-12 11:02:11 +0000 UTCOverall I love it! There's a couple of little things that could do with tweaking though. Firstly "former human partner" should be "human former partner" - Mansa is a former partner not a former human. 😁 And secondly, there's something weird going on with the spacing in the blurb, most noticeably in the fourth line of the first paragraph and the bottom of the second paragraph. I think it's stretching/spacing the text to make it an even width, if that makes sense.
Bec Smith
2023-07-12 06:07:49 +0000 UTCWhat a cover! Looks great!
Samara Lilly (Sandra)
2023-07-12 04:40:58 +0000 UTCScreaming crying etc. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
pyracantha
2023-07-12 02:23:47 +0000 UTCOh yes, that's much easier to read!
Emily Gilbert
2023-07-12 00:15:34 +0000 UTCJust the title in the middle of what you see there on the wrap around cover 😊
Whiteley Foster
2023-07-11 23:19:02 +0000 UTCYes thigh high boots😍
Robin Reeks
2023-07-11 23:16:34 +0000 UTCThis is really lovely. What will the spine look like?
Denise Grogan
2023-07-11 22:54:25 +0000 UTCI’d like to take it to flame con first but preorders soon!! 💕
Whiteley Foster
2023-07-11 22:39:43 +0000 UTCYes that’s much better ❤️ When do you think will we be able to hold it in our grabby hands?
Little0cean
2023-07-11 22:22:15 +0000 UTCPerfection!!! ♥️♥️♥️
AJ
2023-07-11 22:19:24 +0000 UTCOmg yes that's so much better. I can't imagine what the experience will be for those reading for the first time with no context! I can't wait
Michelle Garcia
2023-07-11 22:09:31 +0000 UTC😍
ragin2007
2023-07-11 21:58:38 +0000 UTCI LOVE
Shez
2023-07-11 21:58:26 +0000 UTCOh, much better! I was so jazzed to see it that I failed to provide feedback. xD
Vala
2023-07-11 21:42:50 +0000 UTCOh yes, MUCH better with the writing and background ☺️👌tickety boo! I did wonder about the ‘have to’ make amends. They both want to, right?
Nicola Coxon
2023-07-11 21:38:05 +0000 UTC👍
Eileen Smithers
2023-07-11 21:37:28 +0000 UTCThis is amazing. That lighting is fantastic! Both warm and melancholy at the same time. And the little smile on Song's face, and just the fact that IT'S GOING TO BE IN PRINT SOON AAAAAAAAJDHDHWGDGSHD I love everything about it!
Terri J
2023-07-11 21:34:02 +0000 UTCSo much better! 🧡
Arthur
2023-07-11 21:33:40 +0000 UTCOh that is so much better you can read the blurb much easier. Song looks so lovely and lovelorn there, thinking about his human no doubt
Arctic Rose
2023-07-11 21:31:55 +0000 UTCMuch better!
StellaSapiente
2023-07-11 21:31:10 +0000 UTCWANTZ
SH
2023-07-11 21:30:07 +0000 UTCHmm, weird how so?
Whiteley Foster
2023-07-11 21:16:12 +0000 UTCOMG, Song is stunning! The colours are recognisably you. I have to agree with the comments about the lighter text being hard to read against the sky though. But I will be * grabby hands * to get a copy! EDIT: That's a fab improvement with the dark background 👍
Jayne Doe
2023-07-11 21:12:23 +0000 UTCLove it!!!
Atelerix
2023-07-11 20:52:58 +0000 UTCBeautiful art, but the half white half yellow text for the back of the book is a bit difficult to read. The two different colours also distract from the actual text content.
Arthur
2023-07-11 20:51:20 +0000 UTCI love it 😻 but I agree with the others. The font fades into the background a bit. Is Devil Song the official titel for the series or just for this volume?
Little0cean
2023-07-11 20:46:10 +0000 UTCI LOVE it! I WANT it! :D
Vala
2023-07-11 20:45:55 +0000 UTC😍Absolutely beautiful art! but the color of the text fades into the background at some points making it difficult to read.🤔
Lady Sammy
2023-07-11 20:42:59 +0000 UTCI am so freaking excited oh my god 😍😍😍
avery (ineffable critter)
2023-07-11 20:40:01 +0000 UTCAAAAAAHHHHHHH I LOOOOOVE THIIIIIISSSSSSS
TheeeDJSiren
2023-07-11 20:37:59 +0000 UTCSeconding the suggestion about the background. Maybe you could put a block of solid color under the text of the blurb, with the cover art showing around the edges?
Emily Gilbert
2023-07-11 20:35:39 +0000 UTCAbsolutely gorgeous! I'm going completely feral over it!
sparksearcher
2023-07-11 20:34:57 +0000 UTCBeautiful as always ❤️
Kyle Rose
2023-07-11 20:31:13 +0000 UTCThe art is gorgeous! As always. I would only suggest either keeping a darker background so the white writing stands out more or having the words against the lighter background changed to black print else it’s a little hard to pick out. 💜
Nicola Coxon
2023-07-11 20:30:51 +0000 UTCA literal masterpiece !!!! Love the blurb on the back too!!
ineffablepuns
2023-07-11 20:28:57 +0000 UTCTo be very honest I adore the drawing, it is stunning, however I am not sure about the font, it just looks odd.
Jenna Pateman
2023-07-11 20:28:37 +0000 UTC
