TIMEBOUND CHAPTER 1 - PAGES 8,9,10
Added 2025-04-01 18:00:11 +0000 UTCBAD BOYFRIEND ALERT!!!
triple page upload this time! I love drawing Orion and his stupid face so much dude. honestly super happy with Millie's color palette too, I think they both fit the setting quite well
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YEAHHHH YOU GET IT, i'm glad someone noticed that
Timebound
2025-04-04 13:23:20 +0000 UTCPoor Orion, he just can't rely on Zafar. I like the detail of the coffee stain on the letter (I don't know if that's it) could indicate as well that he doesn't care as much about Orion. Ryzz is your time to step upppp. Also i don't think i've seen Orion this angry, my poor boy
Emilionvmm
2025-04-02 01:14:49 +0000 UTCTHANK YOUUU, there's gonna be a lot more of her so i'm glad she looks good :D I tried like maaany different iterations of the letter panel but the bolder ones were also quite ineligible to some of my friends, I tried to put in captions but it looked cheap??? it was just URGHHH I wish I was more of a typography guy, this one proved the most legible among my small test group but I figured it still wasn't good enough. I think it's at least overall comprehensible through context clues
Timebound
2025-04-01 21:44:15 +0000 UTCYeeees, awesome work here! Millie's gorgeous, it's great to see a new character and she fits perfectly, as if she was created years ago along your other characters One little issue this time tho, Zafar's handwritting is gorgeous but a tad hard to read, especially the part on the top left, as it is curved because of the letter (great attention to details here!). If the text could be bolder, it may improves it a bit Last thing, using cover's posing for Orion on the last panel is SUCH a great idea
Daigoro100
2025-04-01 20:41:22 +0000 UTC
