The Sixth School. Chapter 016.
Added 2023-05-21 10:28:39 +0000 UTCHi guys,
Here is Chapter Sixteen.
Don't let perfect be the enemy of good!
I just learned the truth of that saying with this chapter. I could have finished this chapter on Friday. However, there was this one paragraph that I just couldn't seem to get right. No matter how many times I wrote and rewrote it, it just wouldn't come together the way I wanted it to. So for the past two days, I kept struggling to get it right. In the end, however, I was forced to just delete it altogether!
And guess what?
When I reread the chapter, I realized that this single paragraph that I'd spent so much time on, didn't really add all that much to the story. Even without it, the chapter came together just fine. *sigh😐 I feel like smacking myself in the back of the head!😂
Anyway, as always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
Great chapter, glad to see that Greg didn't immediately go completely OP And that you added a very nice in universe explanation for it. :-) Looking forward to the next chapter.
Magnus
2023-05-21 18:32:33 +0000 UTCOops! Thanks for catching that. I'll change it.
BlaQQuill
2023-05-21 15:36:48 +0000 UTCGood chapter, thanks. FYI: First line says Chapter Fifteen. I like that Uncle isn't going to be too easy to deal with, and also he's got a little bit of loot on him.
Murky
2023-05-21 15:34:17 +0000 UTC
