Editing Marathon: Chapter Four.
Added 2024-07-27 12:30:22 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Four.
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Comments
#23 - got some extra punctuation ".," near the end of this sentence: Exposing your patients to your bodily fluids is a quick way to add more complications to the treatment process if not outright killing them.,” Alena explained.
Murky
2024-08-04 16:08:09 +0000 UTC#21 - He knew that someday, Alena was bound to leave and so had repeatedly urged her to take in her daughter as his apprentice. | Should be: his daughter as her apprentice
Murky
2024-08-04 16:02:59 +0000 UTC