Editing Marathon: Chapter Eleven.
Added 2024-07-30 11:44:54 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Eleven.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
#2, can remove 'he was on', seems redundant? : Greg had almost exhausted all of the little strength he had shifting into a sitting position on the bed (he was on) .
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2024-08-06 15:03:27 +0000 UTC
