A Christmas Wish: Ideal Body 1/2 (WIP)
Added 2023-01-08 21:41:09 +0000 UTCThis was originally planned to be just a short 15 pages Age progression sequence I wanted to do for Christmas but it grew to be 40 pages! I've been wanting to do an age progression from kid to adult for a while now.
Please let me know what you think of this so far, what do you think of these page styles compared to the manga paneling style? And do you think there's too much text or is it just right?
I always love to hear your thoughts!
Comments
Hmm.. I think it would be great if there's long hair in adult form.
NGLIG
2023-01-11 16:24:56 +0000 UTCI mean i empithise with trans people, but that sort of comment here seems silly and inappropriate in this content. That's kind of the point of the forced fem kink :p sorta like reading a manga tagged NTR and complaining about there being cheating.
Poggie
2023-01-09 09:45:12 +0000 UTCYeah. Like I said, Uncomfortable Implications front and center.
Thomas
2023-01-09 02:01:09 +0000 UTCYeah I do feel bad for Haruna, being transfem myself I understand how much dysphoria hurts π.
TashaTheWitchQueen
2023-01-09 01:56:05 +0000 UTCPages 6 and 7. I imagen a LOT of female to male trans people have had something like that happen to them.
Thomas
2023-01-09 01:15:55 +0000 UTCGreat job as usual
Poggie
2023-01-09 01:15:24 +0000 UTCWhat?
Poggie
2023-01-09 01:00:26 +0000 UTCYes, I love Age Progression stories! Definitely feel like there's a dearth of them out there so really glad to see you try your hand at one. I think there's still a bit too much text per page and could be pared down so that pages flow more smoothly but it's not a huge deal. Looking forward to the next part!
2023-01-08 22:59:06 +0000 UTCAlso, reading some more and yikes on trikes. Uncomfortable Implications right out there in front for everyone to see.
Thomas
2023-01-08 22:51:28 +0000 UTCLooking forward to it!
TashaTheWitchQueen
2023-01-08 22:46:11 +0000 UTCThanks! And yeah I'll color Popularity as well, it just takes more time cause there are more pages to ink.
Arisa
2023-01-08 22:40:12 +0000 UTCThis is very nice Ari, Itβs an interesting twist of the usual alien abduction! By the way, will you be coloring Popularity?
TashaTheWitchQueen
2023-01-08 22:37:11 +0000 UTCThe same. I'm already loving them at 77%.
Thomas
2023-01-08 22:21:57 +0000 UTCGreat work! I would like to see the following part ASAP!
Henry Yu
2023-01-08 22:04:20 +0000 UTC
