Alien Abduction Chapter 2 (3/3) (WIP)
Added 2025-06-22 15:20:00 +0000 UTC(Updated 06/22/25)
Added about 20 new pages ending chapter 2. Most of it is a sex scene. How is it compared to the old version?
Please let me know your thoughts in the comment or discord server. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support. I can't continue doing this without everyone. Thank you so much!
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May 2025
I'm sorry there's been a very long delay between posts. Here's some progress to the story. There's still another half to this part that contains mostly sex scenes, I think I can get it done a little faster. A lot of things changed from the original version but I tried to keep some aspects the same. I always feel unsure about the dialogue, pacing, and flow, sometime I wonder if it feels natural and if there's too much text. Maybe I've just been staring at it for too long.
Comments
Finally a paid member of your work. Great stuff. Looking forward to the breeding kink. Keep up the good work
SpaghettiJack
2025-08-01 00:14:03 +0000 UTCGood shit my boy
Xylynthian
2025-07-31 20:25:34 +0000 UTCI can't find quality that meets or beats this anywhere. Well done π€
Gnarwhale
2025-06-24 15:45:24 +0000 UTCI do wish the mind control aspect was more subtle. Aliens tweaking dials to increase her sensitivity, etc. rather than just implanting thoughts into her head that aren't hers. Makes it a lot hotter for me if it's her actual dirty thoughts
faceless
2025-06-23 07:29:32 +0000 UTCReally enjoying this re-write, especially for the compelling story I'm sensing underneath the smut. Might be reading to much into it, but I have a feeling that a core part of Hitomi's rejection isn't solely based on "I was a man, and I want to still be one." There's a deeper insecurity there. Hitomi was an attractive model who was also a virgin. Given that isn't inconceivable that attractive guys with repugnant personalities can still have girlfriends and have sex, it makes me wonder why Hitomi was. My best guess is that they couldn't hide their repugnant personality well, because that personality was the reason they became who they were before the change. My theory is that Hitomi was a insecure, unattractive nerd who was mistreated by peers. He devoted himself to becoming a model to "fix" that problem, but never disagreed with his peers core belief. That those who are ugly or unattractive deserve any cruelty inflicted on them. Which is why he was a virgin. He changed himself to be the model, so he believes he deserves to treat the unattractive as cruelly as he wants. Which is why he hates Satoshi so much. How dare this dateless nerd, who he totally doesn't see himself in, get in good with Eriko and succeed where he failed. Because that would mean all that work he put himself through would have been meaningless. Again, just a theory. I'm not even sure the story will go that way, but I'm excited Arisane-san!
RoachZoach
2025-06-22 16:43:51 +0000 UTCIt's good. I'd have to reread the original version to see how exactly it's changed, but so far I like the rework.
M4C1
2025-06-03 02:59:42 +0000 UTCCan't wait for the finished comic
Kian Stephenson-Beckett
2025-05-30 14:02:05 +0000 UTCMe encanta esta historia ojala ven que iba a pasa en la parte 4 ya que en 3 en gimnasio estuvo bueno y quede que pasaria en capitulo 4
Kitsu woolf
2025-05-30 01:42:52 +0000 UTCTurned out good
Arisane (Twicetale)
2025-05-29 21:32:44 +0000 UTCζ΄ζ°ηε€ͺζ ’δΊ
Yue See1e
2025-05-29 15:28:43 +0000 UTCI like the progress so far, keep it up
Duranta Love
2025-05-29 14:50:14 +0000 UTCI can wait forever for your work to come out.
γγ€γ³γ εδΈ
2025-05-29 13:30:27 +0000 UTCFINALLY!!!!
Martin J
2025-05-29 12:13:10 +0000 UTCNice
Pharsis Geirdrifuls
2025-05-29 12:04:55 +0000 UTCibenz and arisane in one day? I'm spoiled
Amberino
2025-05-29 11:59:08 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter !!π
G.B
2025-05-29 11:47:37 +0000 UTCLET'S FUCKING GOOOAoO
Notsicks
2025-05-29 11:15:51 +0000 UTC
