The Hero Fall
Added 2024-01-25 09:53:44 +0000 UTCSorry to keep you all waiting again. This took longer than expected for what was originally meant to be a short generic story. It was fun drawing something fantasy setting with edgy armor but those armors took a lot more time than expected, probably because this was a bit too clean for a sketch as well.
I know I originally thought to do a 4-5 pages short and it's already been extended to 12 but I still think it was too short for portraying the corruption process. If this is popular I can consider extending it later when I get back to coloring it.
Please do let me knows your thoughts on it in the comments, as I always enjoy reading all of your comments and feedback. I also greatly value and appreciate your patience and continued support in keeping this going!
Comments
I'll admit, the second I saw this I was thinking about the story from the discontinued section, which is still probably my favorite of Arisane's stuff.
Nicholas
2025-03-18 08:18:42 +0000 UTCI love this fallen hero idea, how soon will you go back to extend and colour it?
道民 李
2025-01-30 09:20:56 +0000 UTCCan't wait for pinups
UltraOrbZero
2024-01-26 20:46:55 +0000 UTCI think a couple more pages with the hero resisting and being trained would really take this to an 11. Even just an extra page after the kiss and an extra page after the BJ with some implication of time passing and the hero's resolve failing would add a lot.
faceless
2024-01-26 09:22:08 +0000 UTCHi love the comic, the characters and concept. I wish there was more focus on the anatomical transformation like you usually do…
Nelso
2024-01-26 00:55:18 +0000 UTCIf you do a part 2, might I suggest the tyrant king as the target of the succubization?
Grill Chicken
2024-01-25 19:56:05 +0000 UTCRoughly 2 weeks or more, storyboarding takes around 2 days when I actually get going on it. But I think storyboarding takes the most concentration so it’s the hardest part in getting started because that’s where most of the scene visualizing and planning happens. So sometimes it’s a while until I can get myself to start on the storyboarding.
Arisa
2024-01-25 18:15:29 +0000 UTCI fuckin love it! I've been looking so much forward to this one in these days and it's finally released. Great job Ari, very nice art! ❤️ Queen Ludia and her Demon King will be added to my favorites list next to Hitomi and Haruna hehe. Please extending this amazing story, I really like it, I hope the longer part will have more baby making scenes, one in the process of corruption and one when Ludia falls in love with her beloved King or when they fall in love with each other~ Definitely the last page is so good, both the dialogue and art are so wonderful and romantic?! 😁 Really looking forward to seeing it colored and how Queen and King rebuild that country, repopulate their family. Tks for your diligence Ari :3
Bluemoon_445
2024-01-25 18:13:28 +0000 UTCQuestion, how long does it take you to make a comic like this? How long does it take you to story board it?
icarue
2024-01-25 18:06:38 +0000 UTCwill we have part 2 where the goddess shows up and becomes corrupted also? Ludia can pay the favor back.
achang91
2024-01-25 15:19:30 +0000 UTCSooooooooo good!!!!
G.B
2024-01-25 15:06:02 +0000 UTCMasterful work so far, I look forward to seeing it colored, and I can't wait to see the pinup you make of Ludia later as well
MangamanZX Call me Zed
2024-01-25 14:43:31 +0000 UTCOh wow, for a “Noble Hero” to fall so far becoming the beautiful Succubus Queen bearing the next generation of Demons! That last page of her happily pregnant, curled in her kings arms is lovely. Very Sexy story Ari! ❤️
TashaTheWitchQueen
2024-01-25 13:27:33 +0000 UTCGreat work! (Honestly I wanna see more from this one too)
SpicedRelish
2024-01-25 11:56:25 +0000 UTCYou really did a great job on this one.
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-01-25 10:00:00 +0000 UTC
