Alien Abduction Chapter 1 (1/3)
Added 2024-06-01 06:46:40 +0000 UTCSorry to keep you all waiting once again. Updating the first chapter of Alien Abduction with more setup for a better story before getting it translated into Japanese in preparation for Summer Comiket.
I'm not reworking the entire thing but updating it with more event and characters. Showing the event before and after the abduction, also changing dialogues to match the story direction. I want this to feel like a proper story.
In this part we get more chance to see what Hideki was like as a guy before his inevitable transformation into a girl. What do you think now that we learn a little more about him?
I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback in the comment section. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support, thank you!
PS: With the scene taking place on a camping trip, I tried watching some Yuru Camp anime to get inspiration and now I want to try camping too!
Comments
I was thinking of American Psycho Patrick Batement while drawing that scene.
Arisa
2024-06-19 21:05:12 +0000 UTCYeah there is.
Arisa
2024-06-19 21:02:36 +0000 UTCHaha I see it. I was kinda reminded of Yoshikage Kira a bit.
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-06-06 09:51:43 +0000 UTCAoki giving Patrick Bateman in the first few pages is so good
Corey Crossen
2024-06-06 08:30:29 +0000 UTCThis looks great and being able to see how theses characters were before everything gives us an understanding of what they are feeling and thinking at moments. It also allows for us to see how there characters grow and mature over the course of the story
Todd Crim
2024-06-04 15:50:43 +0000 UTCany page for the upcoming forced mind control by the alien machine? thats so arousing
道民 李
2024-06-04 02:50:10 +0000 UTCJust deleted my previous comment. It was messy and bothered me, but I was too tired to fix it. Anyway, I like the idea of fleshing out the story a bit more. When the images finish loading, I'll go through them and then call it a night. Thanks for the update and take care.
M4C1
2024-06-02 17:48:34 +0000 UTCI think is interesting is that even before aoki’s transformation he still wants to prove himself as manly. I am looking forward to the after scenarios to contrast the set up.
Omega1918
2024-06-01 17:21:28 +0000 UTCThat shouldn't be the case? If youre confused by the first page its meant to be like the opening of a horror movie where it shows the aliens taking someone earlier. We considered having a missing sign for the two young people taken at the bus station, but it just didnt work out that way. Page one takes place weeks before the rest of the comic.
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-06-01 16:26:01 +0000 UTCI like the idea of fleshing out the story. I'm curious what you do with the new characters moving forward too.
Cryofly
2024-06-01 15:57:37 +0000 UTCTurned out good. I'm excited to see more knowing that's next.
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-06-01 15:40:05 +0000 UTCI love this! A few day ago someone sucker punched me and I didn't fight back and called the cops, like Ishida did in the OG first chapter. Only, I didn't get abducted by aliens. RIP
MemoMii
2024-06-01 13:58:16 +0000 UTClooking good but... can you put a little number on the page I think some are out of order thanks
toby
2024-06-01 08:23:19 +0000 UTCI already really like AA, but you updating the prequel story like this makes it even more exciting, can't waittttt 🫶
Bluemoon_445
2024-06-01 07:52:37 +0000 UTCYes.
Arisa
2024-06-01 07:22:21 +0000 UTCIs a continuation for this series planned then? Fleshing out past issues seems like a preparation for further issues.
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2024-06-01 07:14:22 +0000 UTCThanks! I want to keep getting better.
Arisa
2024-06-01 07:10:38 +0000 UTCOh, I apologize! I’m sure you will be able to be accepted! Absolute Good luck to you! 😊
ルナシバ
2024-06-01 07:04:36 +0000 UTCStill waiting to see if I will actually get in.
Arisa
2024-06-01 07:03:00 +0000 UTCdamn cute stuff, ur style has evolved so much!
Mustafa
2024-06-01 07:01:36 +0000 UTCCongratulations on Summer Comiket! Best of luck for everything! Wish you the best!
ルナシバ
2024-06-01 06:49:46 +0000 UTC
