Bedroom ベッドルーム 12p
Added 2023-05-06 12:30:04 +0000 UTC
Hello, this is Horumu.
I decided to challenge myself and try drawing a manga for the first time. The content is simply two people fooling around in a bedroom, just something I wanted to draw.
At first, I planned to try and draw only three pages, but as I continued, it grew and ended up being 12 pages long. As a beginner, the page count was too high, and it took me a long time to complete.
I considered adding dialogue, but I didn't feel confident in my translation skills, so I chose to represent dialogue with symbols. I hope that even though my manga skills are still developing, someone can enjoy it even a little bit.
こんにちは。ホルムです。
初めてマンガを描くことに挑戦してみました。
内容的には、ベッドルームでいちゃついている二人が、描きたかっただけの作品です。
初めは3ページぐらいで挑戦してみようと思って書き始めたのですが、だんだん増えて12ページになりました。初めての挑戦なのにページ数が多すぎて、完成までめちゃくちゃ時間がかかりました。
セリフを入れようか迷ったけれど上手に翻訳できる気がしなかったので、セリフは記号みたいな表記で「どうにかこうにか伝われ！」と思って描きました。
まだ発展途上ですが、少しでも楽しんでもらえれば幸いです。
Comments
I'm glad they were pleased with my efforts!
Horumu
2023-05-06 18:27:32 +0000 UTCIt's so good, I love it! And you pulled off having no dialogue really well.
Scraps
2023-05-06 16:57:22 +0000 UTCIt tends to happen to some of us, even the best, feeling the work could have been done better, but I gotta say you did amazing, the last panel with the kiss in the cheeks is very wholesome
the foxxo
2023-05-06 12:56:51 +0000 UTCAfter finishing it, I lost my confidence for some reason, but I'm really happy if you enjoyed it.
Horumu
2023-05-06 12:51:43 +0000 UTCWow o.o this looks really good, I think you did a fantastic job on your first manga. And also it was very hot how they fooled together x3
the foxxo
2023-05-06 12:43:06 +0000 UTC
