The Domino Effect - Part 14 - Trouble 2/2
Added 2021-08-13 18:00:05 +0000 UTCThe Beginning is over.
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ah Eli... are you planning to get Emma to notice Nikolai secret by fattening up three other girls?... not a bad idea and now with Mari in place thanks to Nikolai always helping those in distress she's going to start slowly taking Emmas attention away forcing her to find out the truth herself causing dominoes to fall as his secret starts slowly gets out somehow?
maldy
2021-08-18 13:40:16 +0000 UTCI honestly like the chubby blonde gamer girl best
Christopher
2021-08-17 19:48:38 +0000 UTCI knew it the new guy (forgot his name) I had a hunch since, I think, three, four pageโs ago.
Johnny
2021-08-17 04:14:25 +0000 UTCKip's stuff is not primarily weight gain content, it is more focused of stuffing and belly expansion. Which is fine. But their plots in my opinion have become kinda stale. This stuff, I can't wait to see if belt's tendency for 500 pluser shows up.
Nick Sweeney
2021-08-13 21:02:20 +0000 UTCWell Mari was hesitant about the whole gaining weight and tried to resist, but it seems she succumbed to the temptation and her mind is set to do anything to please Nikolai (which we don't know yet if it's true) And it's nice to see that she actually like stuffing her face and was just restraining herself. I've said it multiple time but Mari is my favorite, she looks really cute and needless to say that with her stuffed gut at the end she looks good and cute, I look forward for when the pounds will start pilling up on her. If this was only the beginning, it's already great so the rest of the story will be good, and I wonder what Elijas motivations are, I doubt that he'll only stop with three girl.
raph-pat
2021-08-13 18:47:26 +0000 UTCVery good comic mate! I'm impressed by how intriguing is your writing. I joined your Patreon because of it, better than Kipteitei's plots by far (just to mention one example). I'm really willing to see the continuation. If you don't mind me to say, there are parts where the drawing drops a little, but as I mentioned, the writing makes up for it. I think you'll totally improve it as you continue. I also hope you update it more often, but that's just my picky opinion ๐ ๐. Thanks for your time, you're doing great! ๐๐ช
jose torres
2021-08-13 18:33:07 +0000 UTCLove it!
Ryan Brogan
2021-08-13 18:10:54 +0000 UTCItโs alllll coming together mwehehe :3
galactaknight4
2021-08-13 18:09:43 +0000 UTCOkay, Mari's backstory is super cute. I am still not sure, however, if I am team Mari or team Emma. I will have to wait and see what you do with Emma.
Nick Sweeney
2021-08-13 18:07:23 +0000 UTC
