Boobgirl Submission p. 1
Added 2016-02-19 06:30:29 +0000 UTCSo, this is the first bit of that submission comic I was talking about on Tumblr and Picarto. I'm keeping this particular stuff Patron exclusive for a bit since I kind of want feedback here as I've never really done a full on mind break hentai comic before.
If anybody has any ideas for either dialogue and/or angles, then I'm all ears.
Comments
Whew! That was one of the things I wanted to avoid with the dialogue. Glad to know I'm at least on the right track~
JokerBro
2016-02-19 17:37:54 +0000 UTCI'd say it's a solid first page/panel...camera is looking down on her in her submission and the dialogue compliments it without being overly-cheesy like a lot of other hentai
Ari
2016-02-19 17:29:50 +0000 UTC
