Demon Queened - Chapter 8 - Edited!
Added 2021-04-21 21:36:54 +0000 UTCSo thius is the first chapter with paid-for editing. Hopefully it shows? I also took time during the editing to tweak a couple things - but nothing too major.
You can read the edited version on my site at https://princesskay.net/wp/demon-queened-chapter-8/
Or you can download it off dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/s/q5ias3hywlzssgp/Demon%20Queened%20-%20Chapter%208.pdf?dl=0
