Hey Kique, been long since last time but I was following you a bit before first Asmundr page. I just wanted to say that the developpement of your art since then is incredible. Continue. π Also, as for recent problems with Home and Critiques.... you should pay more attention to critique from Patreon and not those of DA. Not just because of the money, but because its so easy to critique around things you dont support on daily basis. Our advice here isnt worth more than theirs, but if someone critique on Patreon, its sure he/she is enough imvolved in the whole story and comic way more than the randoms on DA, thus they know more how you work and how to produce a good critique. Dont change everything for some random people, and dont be hestant and scared to ask us here your advice about it, if the critique is really well founded, if we noticed/think the same thing. We are here for you and these amazing story, not just as financial help, but as a whole. We are here to help you carry on the stress and relieve the weight, to help you in decision and to hold on the light when you need guidance. We cant make decisions for you, thus we have to respect it, but if somehow we can help it being easier for you, it is our meant to do so. I can't talk for others, so I can just say that come from me, as a long term watcher that saw all this Asmundr/Home universe bloom, and as a Patron. (Even do my pledge is for now not high, i used to give 15-20/month but financial shits. Blep). Keep up the good work, spirit flight high, dont let it cloud you.
Viktor
2017-06-22 00:40:00 +0000 UTC
Oh dang. Why do people on DA gotta ruin everything D:
Moki
2017-06-21 22:16:24 +0000 UTC
Were there changes to these last two pages that I'm just not noticing? Idk why they were reuploaded XD
Moki
2017-06-21 19:54:53 +0000 UTC
Can somebody translate that stone? xD
Mirku
2017-06-21 19:04:05 +0000 UTC
Great page and great art as usual. (Since the first page was deleted, I'm just going post what I really liked, I should have shared that too.) Love the sunrise as it puts an end to a dark and tumultuous night. I hope the dawn light marks the beginning of literally shedding some light on Aira's past.
Silver Huskey
2017-06-21 17:22:52 +0000 UTC
A calming sunrise to combat a hellish night. Fantastic art and storytelling!
L
2017-06-21 16:58:11 +0000 UTC
I love these two last pages, absolutly gorgeous. ^^
Tora Collita
2017-06-21 16:36:56 +0000 UTC
I think the situation in general looks suspicious. At night in the middle of nowhere, stormy, black obelisk generating a hurricane around it and lifting Aira off the ground, remembering that Aira was really weak and desperate to survive, all gives "this is wrong" vibes, I think. He might've guessed when he jumped on Aira, but quickly had the decision confirmed after the spirit got upset, like it'd just been cheated.
KFCemployee
2017-06-21 16:30:16 +0000 UTC
How did Kierr know what was going on?
Superrad1337
2017-06-21 16:20:14 +0000 UTC
<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gw7LlOgYIWs" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gw7LlOgYIWs</a> this is all i can hear at the last pannel
2017-06-21 16:03:20 +0000 UTC
The pages are beautiful and will always be ! Love your art ;)
Akela74
2017-06-21 15:19:04 +0000 UTC
Because people on deviantart are assholes.
Kitsune
2017-06-21 15:13:46 +0000 UTC
Aweeee this is so cute I love how this ends!!!
WyntersMagik
2017-06-21 14:52:41 +0000 UTC
A beautiful ending to a terrifying encounter.
Trip3of3
2017-06-21 14:51:41 +0000 UTC
How come these two pages were reposted? I'm very confused.