Tara and Karl Chapter 4: Page 7
Added 2020-05-02 12:01:00 +0000 UTCEDIT: Fixed a typo!
Comments
Awww the poor store clerk!
Senseiwoo
2020-05-04 03:01:48 +0000 UTCRealized I didn't address your second point... I do struggle with the left to right thing for the dialogue. Sometimes I forget, other times the image just looked better the way the end result looked. If I can't get the dialogue going from left to right I do have it read in order from up to down. Thank you for the feedback!!
Harlock
2020-05-03 11:25:56 +0000 UTCNow I'm imagining Darby "borrowing" one of the whips DQ surely has laying around, lacing up a black corset, and going out Mistress'ing in the night.
Asani
2020-05-03 04:21:44 +0000 UTCGood catch and fixed!
Harlock
2020-05-02 23:30:13 +0000 UTCHeh, Some of that will be explained.
Harlock
2020-05-02 23:30:01 +0000 UTCI love how insanely skilled Darby is as both a witch and a sleuth!! Don’t mess with Darby!! Feel bad for that poor shopgirl though... It has NOT been her week.
Kai Lee
2020-05-02 22:09:38 +0000 UTCTara is still there....but Karl is missing!
Mike K
2020-05-02 20:10:05 +0000 UTCWow. She figured that out quick.
Sean McDermott
2020-05-02 18:38:16 +0000 UTCShe didn’t leave a trial? I believe you mean trail. Also just a simple criticism sometimes it is hard to figure out which word bubble to read first. If possible please structure them so that we can read from left to right. Happy to see the mannequin again!
Marissa
2020-05-02 18:02:07 +0000 UTCShe's had quite the onboarding process and accelerated training with our Demon Queen.
Asani
2020-05-02 16:31:27 +0000 UTCI'm wondering how powerful Darcy is in comparison to Elsie and Tara... she doesn't seem to regard this as a dangerous situation. And this is even more impressive given that she was a normal human guy only a few months/years ago... ^^
clancy688
2020-05-02 14:12:10 +0000 UTCThe poor shopkeeper is going to start looking for a nice quiet location.....
Mike K
2020-05-02 12:35:37 +0000 UTCAaaand there went half the universe... Only they're mannequins now instead of dust ;)
kurogetsui
2020-05-02 12:22:22 +0000 UTC
