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Tara and Karl Chapter 4: Page 19

Tara and Karl Chapter 4: Page 19

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Janet: "Diplomatic im-Mana-ty!" Demon Queen: "It's just been REVOKED."

Dollmistress

LOL! I wondered if anyone would notice that it was a shoe shop they were in front of.

Harlock

Quick, someone check that background shoe shop for Karl :D

Dollmistress

DQ showing today why she wears the crown.

Asani

Thanks.

Harlock

A couple of typo/grammar corrections: "let" should be "let's", and "picks her up by her neck" is clunky, consider "picks her up by the neck" instead. Also not sure if it should be "The Demon Queen" instead of just "Demon Queen", in the narration box at the start.

Dollmistress

Nah he was brand new, straight off a mannequin. If he got purchased then he won't be disposed of so fast. But he might still be in the store the shop borrows them from

Sean McDermott

Meanwhile, Karl is in the discount bin at a Thrift store.....

Mike K

The beginning of the end.....

Mike K


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