Tara and Karl Chapter 4: Page 24
Added 2020-06-05 12:00:04 +0000 UTCEDIT!!!
This page has given me grief ever since I rendered the images for it. The struggle was real while trying to fit the dialogue I needed and to make the image look at least somewhat dynamic. I made a few changes to this image today to help make things more clear thanks to some helpful and constructive criticism from Dollmistress. Thanks, Dollmistress!!
Feedback like this helps me improve so I always welcome it!
Comments
Thanks and fixed! (again.. LOL)
Harlock
2020-06-05 19:46:14 +0000 UTCThe only genuine error I see after the update is "having fogging", which should be "having fogged". Looks really good now! :)
Dollmistress
2020-06-05 19:32:11 +0000 UTCGood question!
Harlock
2020-06-05 18:56:12 +0000 UTCLOL! the chapter isn't over yet. We will see Janet in again in a few more pages. Who do you think Demon Queen's 'new toy' is that she mentioned? 😉
Harlock
2020-06-05 18:53:16 +0000 UTCYou mean hte mistake of claiming you will "deal with the demon queen" on live television?
Umiko
2020-06-05 17:48:15 +0000 UTCOkay all I'm looking at now is not-enslavement. So much not-enslavement, everywhere, as far as the eye can see. Where's the 100-page scene of Janet's fate? The media has a right to know the full story of what the Demon Queen is going to do to Janet! Science must analyse the details so humanty can never repeat her mistakes! :O
Dollmistress
2020-06-05 16:12:42 +0000 UTCThe BIG unanswered question is: Is Tara a blonde now, or what?
Mike K
2020-06-05 12:10:49 +0000 UTC
