Carol swimsuit sketch fail?

She seems a little thicker than usual (not that that's a bad thing :) ). She seems to have a London Andrews vibe going on here.

Nathan Weber

That sharp curve would be fixed with color. As it is, it takes a second look to understand.

William Caddell

Hmmmm, something about the part of the suit covering her left breast throws me off. It almost looks like a bikini top with how sharp the curve in it is.

Marcus Mendelson

The only fault I can see is the desire for more. I know my want is technically my problem, but I think everyone here has that same problem... So damn you Jackie for fucking up

I tend to agree. I am a fan of one-pieces and form-fitting clothing more than skin. Especially if the clothing is shiny/iridescent. If Carol were into cosplay, Overwatch's Mei would be a natural fit.

John Trauger

Other than Carol not having a right shoulder yet, I don't see what the problem is. I look at that thin a strap on that busty a girl and I hear Scotty in my head saying "she cannae take the strain, captain!"

John Trauger

The hand is kind of messed up, but the picture is still awesome. Carol in a bikini's not a bad thing to imagine, either. ;D

RetroMG

Feel free to f--- up <i>more</i> pictures this bad!

Perfesser Bear

I love the pose and content, the only thing that I see that could improve things is the foreshortening angle of the shoulders. Love any pics of Carol tho really...

GlitchedGent

I guess it depends on each one kinks but for me, Carol in a bikini would be less boner inducing, as it would cross the line between "I'm sexy and I know it" and "I'm trying too hard to be sexy".

Abraham Limpo Martinez

Frankly, the one piece is pretty erection-inducing as far as *I'M* concerned... &lt;3

Major Matt Mason

She's just playing with the shoulder strap with her thumb, from my view.

David Paul

doesn't look "fucked up" to me ... i think you're just tired

LH

I fail to see the fail here...&lt;3

Shannon Traska

It looks quite good! I'm surprised that of all your characters, I find Carol to be quite attractive. You've got quite a good piece here, Jackie. I'd persevere with it!

Rhys Lawson

Only thing that looks strange to me is the way she's pulling on it with her left hand.

Tyler Vincent

Looks on track to me. I’d like to see the finished product

Bill Saunders