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Matou Sakura -Heavens Feel- Part 1 (Alter)

Added 2020-03-28 16:03:29 +0000 UTC

I feel like I got a bit more creative on the Alter story since this never actually happened in the original Visual Novel. But I tried to use the same magical knowledge presented in the original novels and integrate it here in short lewd storytelling.

I thought I initially did a good job of it but now that I'm reading it for the 4th time, I have to wonder maybe it feels a bit too rushed. I think I did rush it a tad bit more than I would have liked but ideally, I didn't want to use the same cutscenes more than 2 or 3 times so I had limited space to work with for storytelling but let's be real, Visual Novels ARE wordy and the original novels took up the entire screen with texts. If I wanted to mimic the original style of storytelling Nasu presented in the game, I'd probably have ended up with 30~50 pages.

Well, enough talking about what I could have done better. Here is the story for you all to enjoy ^^

Maybe I really ought to look into hiring a Chinese and Japanese translator to localize this for their respective audience hmm... >.>

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