HMGBAPS Ch2 P123 (New Version)
Added 2020-07-13 11:12:44 +0000 UTCRe-reading my script, AND your reactions, I decided to update the page with new dialogues that are I think closer to my original intent, and loops better with what comes next, on top of showing more of Eerie's reasoning and current feelings.
Also her repeating again what was already said in the previous pages and chapter could become daunting. This allowed me to remove a part that may have prolongated this exposition too much without really bringing anything and would have been confusing.
So this'll allow me to move forward faster, and with less useless back and forth about what we already hear 100 times. :P
Comments
i really want Lou to get a talking to by Clem, it seems like she needs it more than Eerie.
Jordan Bush
2020-07-15 06:21:57 +0000 UTC*nods nods*
TheKite
2020-07-14 09:33:43 +0000 UTCNah, she doesn't even know the phenomenon exists lol. This said, it's canonically possible, like self ME; but she'd need to live in a den for some time, like that Vespiqueen in Isle of Armor
TheKite
2020-07-14 09:33:35 +0000 UTCAssuming she has good intentions. :'D
TheKite
2020-07-14 09:32:39 +0000 UTCI have to say this version has her dialog sounds more like her expressing her feelings about what happened and how the people around her are acting, rather than what previously felt like she just wasn't listening to anyone else.
LaughyTraffy
2020-07-13 20:10:02 +0000 UTCand when -this- doesn't work, it's time for eerie to self-dynamax!
2020-07-13 13:34:40 +0000 UTCWell the good ol' proverb says "The road to hell is paved with good intentions"
EVAVEN
2020-07-13 12:31:31 +0000 UTC
