Okay I gotta say Holy Fucking Shit. I mean really. I never got into Pokeman, too old. I don't know jack shit about it. I started following Kite's stuff on Hentai Foundry and loved all the Fallout stuff and everything since. But this right here is story telling. Involving all aspects of life. Drama, humor, sex, pain, growth, lust.....it's all there. So damn excellent.
Balthir
2021-04-12 04:21:30 +0000 UTC
This is at least a double oof
Skeletor
2021-04-11 12:19:52 +0000 UTC
oof
YuriShill
2021-04-11 00:44:05 +0000 UTC
It's more to finish and not make this message too long haha, with this simple page you realize why Eerie wanted to leave the profession that hurt her so much in every way. Because he destroyed the person he loved and by destroying her, Lou trampled on her.
BeetBean
2021-04-10 19:32:22 +0000 UTC
The truth Eerie was not a godsend and everyone has a piece of the cake in destroying their relationship, but what never happened until I almost imagine the end of chapter 2 that you rebooted, were Lou's sincere apologies for Eerie.
Also, that anything that Eerie did in the future does not justify the emotional beating that the truth gave him on this page, even the words that Lou used against Eerie made me very cruel.
BeetBean
2021-04-10 19:27:27 +0000 UTC
Yep, that was the core of Lou's part of in this toxic relationship; she had always been a bit self centered, but it got worse as she became famous, until she didn't realize what exactly she was doing to Eerie!
TheKite
2021-04-10 18:53:52 +0000 UTC
It shows that you wanted to show everything that Eerie suffered and you are doing it in an excellent way. Kite, your work is seriously the best.
BeetBean
2021-04-10 17:27:27 +0000 UTC
Emotions are complicated and can make you do stupid and hurtful things to those you love. Rough times.
MadGreenSon
2021-04-10 17:24:35 +0000 UTC
I still think that Lou was too selfish, and now seeing that she treats Eerie like trash, I think that her thinking that Eerie betrayed her is absurd.
Literally first she betrays her first for her mother, and when everything goes wrong with her she simply destroys her emotionally. To then victimize herself and keep saying that Eerie betrayed her and she never did anything wrong.
BeetBean
2021-04-10 17:24:19 +0000 UTC
Ohhh... Wow, I can feel the rage dripping out of the pages