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Remade 1 - Poll Winner: Shokuhou Misaki [Railgun]
Added 2021-04-16 01:43:40 +0000 UTCRemade version of the first one! I wasn't so happy with the first version cause I didn't feel like the pose came out the way I wanted it, thus I wished to remake it.
This is the result! Same scenario with some changes of course! <3
The other sketch will be scrapped to the Dropbox.
Gonna finish this one by the weekend!
$10 pledgers can expect a "suggest addition" post tomorrow!
Comments
I'm very happy that you put so much thought and effort into all your works. I honestly don't see any facial flaws and the "other flaw" you mentioned is what I think I like about it. I don't see where there is much to complain about in your art so far. The simple answer is the number of patrons that follow you. Both versions are perfect.
ZeroBeta
2021-04-16 08:20:19 +0000 UTCReally liking the armbinder and ankle cuffs along with the harness ballgag. This is looking beautiful
Hayter
2021-04-16 07:29:51 +0000 UTCIn short, I though the other one was suffering from certain proportional and facial flaws that left me dissatisfied with it in general, one of the most important aspects for me is to make sure the expressions and forms are properly showcased in them. I did not find that to have been done well in the former pic, thus I remade it to give the angle a better look
Bagelbombed
2021-04-16 06:43:44 +0000 UTCI'm not sure what you have against the first version either. From the first version I like the face expression and the clear angle of view from the front more. In the remake I like that she bends her upper body more forward and the bigger ball gag, so I'm not sure which version is better. Draw what you like and have fun.
ZeroBeta
2021-04-16 04:37:56 +0000 UTCI think I liked the first sketch because of the camera angle, eyes, and the hair looks much better, but hey, whatever works with you. Hopefully the colors can make it better. Keep up the good work.
KingHomeless17
2021-04-16 02:29:53 +0000 UTCNice harness ballgag
Jason Hong
2021-04-16 02:19:41 +0000 UTCNot sure why you weren't happy with the first one as I thought that was pretty great but this is still really good! can't wait to see it finished
Kazaron
2021-04-16 02:19:30 +0000 UTChonestly i liked the other one, but this one seems better
Parhelion
2021-04-16 02:08:20 +0000 UTCI love the way her chest looks against the rope, so much detail!
Sky
2021-04-16 01:55:48 +0000 UTCLooks great man can't wait till its finished
Whatman71
2021-04-16 01:46:03 +0000 UTC
