"What's the next after-hours story?" idea bin
Added 2024-11-01 17:50:42 +0000 UTCthe time for a new story has come!
From now until Friday, November 8th, we'll drop ideas for the next comic here, and we'll give likes to those ideas we're ok with. By all means, give likes to several ideas, not just one. Here is why.
Once Friday comes around, i'll pick the three most liked ideas and put them on a FINAL poll, both here and on Substar, that will decide the winner, by Sunday November 10th, 7pm Mexico city time/CST.
Now, onto the ideas, the usual pointers:
Think of a story's beginning and ending, that's usually the best way to figure out where to go. we can work the middle as we go. More complex, cohesive ideas usually get voted up.
Good stories usually involve characters going through a change, or explore interesting scenarios.
For example:
A) Bonnie has never had sex with a guy➡️Bonnie bones Aldo and is no longer men-virgin.
B) What if hybrids, instead of soldiers, were exotic dancers?
C) What if a human in a fursuit was accidentally confused for a hybrid?
Make sure to suggest which characters (and versions, futa/standard/gender-bent etc) would be involved. Just saying "Butts everywhere" sounds alright but it could mean different things with different characters to different people.
If possible, suggest how the first one or two pages would look like, that gives me a reference to start the comic with. These pages usually introduce the characters, the setting, and the tone of the story.
Length can vary, but 10-12 page-long stories are best. That's roughly 4 to 5 months of work.
Pls don't let the thought of "oh nobody is gonna vote for this" to stop you. I rather have some ideas than none.
Shorter stories are welcome too! 1-3 pages are totally doable. We just need a solid story or motif to have the toons do some lewds, as usual.
here are previous posts if you wanna bring back an old pitch which is totally doable
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-85016288
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-58041823
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-idea-63693542
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-93068259
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-104432649
happy thinking!
Comments
Ack i figured i should copypaste all ideas across platforms for a more uniform like application??? Either way, here's the idea by Machattack left over at substar: "Fel, Trace, Green, and Bonnie all get into an argument about who has a tougher time with non hybrids. Then they all somehow body swapped. Fel and Green swapped, Trace and Bonnie swapped. Fel trying to get used to not having her dick but finding the felixibility enjoyable. Green discovering her dominate side. Trace using her newfound innocent/pure look to snag a date while Bonnie is overwhelmed by all of the attention she’s getting. They all learn something about each other and finally body swap back…into a different person again."
Kenno Arkkan
2024-11-07 22:13:18 +0000 UTCIt's an awesome movie!
MasterShake
2024-11-02 02:32:30 +0000 UTCIm gonna have to watch jaws for this one xD (i've never seen it!)
Kenno Arkkan
2024-11-02 02:04:12 +0000 UTCSHORK Participants: Futa Alex: Police Chief (Brody) , Trace: Oceanographer (Hooper), Mugger: Crazy Shark Fucker (Quint), Sharon: Big freaking Shark (Jaws), Monica: Mayor of Sexy Island, Aldo/Patches/October/Mary/Fel: Random Swimmers/townspeople On a breezy paradise known as Sexy Island the various beach vacation goers are enjoying another sunny and beautiful day. However something POWERFUL lurks within these waters. Casting a large and ominous shadow beneath the waves. We then go to the first sexy scene via flashback to a lab where an evil Alex is experimenting on a version of Sharon. Her experiments to give Sharon a bit more stamina and sex drive have become a double edge sword. Now the height of almost three women Sharon becomes a super horny sex crazed fiend. After having her fun with Sharon, Alex declares the experiment a failure and dumps Sharon off to some poor random universe. Our second sex scene begins from above water where we see some of our vacation goers by themselves out a little farther than the rest, jumping over high waves and having a good time. Our view shifts to underwater focusing on their lower halves. The music starts to pick up, we get closer and closer until Sharon has picked out one of them and gotten a hold of them! With her perfect swimming and strength she’s able to keep her “prey” afloat and begins to eat them out/suck em off one by one. The prey clearly loves it as she’s a pro with her tongue (Second only to Green). Combined with the suction of being underwater and the sheer sexual power of Sharon, the prey can barely take it and orgasm super hard. To the people above water and on land, it appears as if it’s a shark attack and everyone starts freaking out and running for their lives. Having gotten what she wants, Sharon leaves as the prey now spent from how powerful Sharon’s wash safely up on the shore. As they lay there exhausted, the people stand around in horror around them. Police Chief Alex who was watching the whole thing looks out, wondering how to protect these people from such a menace. We then jump to later in the day, Mayor Monica is trying to calm the people down. There really couldn’t be a super horny shark woman on the loose. Alex argues with the mayor, she’s seen what the monster can do, and she vows to bring them to justice. Trace on the other hand wants to study the monster, clearly there’s a reason she wants to have sex. Everyone continues to argue until a loud screeching noise is heard, Mugger at the back of the room runs her nails on a chalkboard with a crudely drawn “shork” picture on it to get everyone’s attention. The grumpy and gruff Muggs proclaims “I’ll fuck your shark. 10,000, I’ll fuck the head, body, and tail.” Tired of everything and to end the madness, the mayor tasks all 3 of them to work together and she’ll pay them equally to end the monster fucking. Shifting back outside we see the three loading up Mugger’s boat with various dildos, donations from the sperm bank, and drums of lube. The three can barely stand each other, poking fun at each other and how they’ll be the ones to finish off the monster. As Trace loads up her cage to go underwater and protect herself the three set out to see. As they drive we each get them sharing a small story of where they come from, Trace being a lover of aquatic life to which Muggs teases her calling her a “Fish fucker”. Muggs served on the SSPussywagon having served in the waifu wars, and finally Alex who hasn’t gotten laid…ever to the surprise of both women. While out at sea and Muggs steering the ship around, Alex dumps various filled condoms into the water to lure Sharon out while Trace studies the map of sightings. Mimicking the movie Alex is hardly paying attention to what she’s doing just casually throwing condoms where we see big Sharon’s head pop out for the first time chomping on the condoms like they are nothing but a snack. Alex in horror slowly backs up into the cabin where Muggs notices the horror on her face where she utters the famous line tweaked. “You’re gonna need more lube”. The three quickly prepare Trace’s cage as she takes her water breathing mod and lowers into the depths. There Sharon quickly notices the prey and takes to the cage. We get our second sex scene that starts off as teasing through the cage before Sharon rips it open and starts having the best sex with Trace. Alex and Mugger look on in horror as she is defeated by Sharon who quickly turns her attention to the two on the boat. Sharon starts ripping into the boat with her bare hands, chomping on wood to get to someone. Muggs tries throwing dildos and finally a large drum of lube at Sharon to distract her but is finally taken down as they lay down on the broken ship deck (srsly how is this not sinking) and start going to town. After they bone, Muggs lays exhausted in her life preserver on the very slowly sinking ship. Sharon’s dio-like aura can be felt as she slowly approaches Alex, ready to give her the best sex of her life. Realizing that no one has been able to get Sharon off, Alex quickly devises a plan to focus on her clit and summons all the courage she has to last long enough to get to it. The two have super passionate and steamy sex aboard the sinking boat. Through her own water breathing mod Alex and Sharon go at it trying to get one another off. Though she’s pent up and struggles to hold on. The race is on as Alex tries to make Sharon cum, Alex get’s a small window and finally takes her shot, fucking and humping like there’s no tomorrow on Sharon who can’t take anymore and explodes (orgasms) in happiness. We cut to our final scene, Muggs and Trace being looked after, a happy and spent Sharon and Alex washed up on the beach with the police taking measures to make sure Sharon doesn’t go crazy again. The end, OR IS IT!?
MasterShake
2024-11-02 01:34:12 +0000 UTCThis is a really fun idea, love seeing October get some love and like Kenno said, seeing this be the "birth" of the mods is super cool.
MasterShake
2024-11-01 23:48:31 +0000 UTCYOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I freaking love this idea, much more fleshed out than what I had. I super love the idea of doing style changes each section, I think that is super rad and will let you get to play with a ton of cool things. I second this to the stars!
MasterShake
2024-11-01 23:46:29 +0000 UTCMy idea for this time around is a sci-fi multiverse one, in which canon fel and aldo (post webcomic, aldo has the infamous moustache) get sucked into a multiverse hub, meet other aldos and fels, guided by futafel, who explains to them how separate universes came to connect with one another. The comic would start with Futafel having sex. we only see her huffing and puffing and throwing her back, only for the camera to pan down and show it's... herself she's fucking! (canon fel), only for canon aldo to join behind her and start a fucktrain. The first sex scene would just establish they're someplace where universes collide, and that they just arrived. After that first scene, they'd walk around the hotel they're staying in. A futuristic looking place, where lots of other fels and aldos happen to be walking about. as they walk about, futafel would exposition-dump about how it all came to be. Alex in one of the universes discovered multiplanar travel (which just happens to be possible through bonnie's orgasms, as hinted at a bajillion years ago on after-hours 19 https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/qln31faz32k5mdj2ao09j/Photos_8YIhk8rJqX.jpg?rlkey=u8e2kongp8phc1cy52ie0fbs4&dl=0 That's when alex would join them and continue explaining as they walk to the hotel pool (just an excuse to see other aldos and fels in swimwear tbh) The multiplanar travel tech had infinite potential, but it was also incredibly dangerous. The first thing Alex tried was, of course, to contact herself from other universes. The problem arose when she realized all her versions are fundamentally evil, one way or another. The more alexes she met, the more they backstabbed each other trying to control the tech. The alex that created the tech, the one we see right there, took everything and escaped into the multiverse. She wished to keep tinkering with the tech but doing so with herself was a no-go, so she tried with fel and aldo. The reasoning being that, just like how she's fundamentally evil in every plane, fels and aldos are fundamentally in love and horny for each other, making them "canonically stable" (super made up term with a vague meaning on purpose) which lets her experiment with the tech safely. that's how "fel-con" came to be. got some other ideas on how fel-con works but that's the gist of the story. canon aldo and fel would continue having sex scenes with other versions of themselves as they continue exploring the concept of fel-con, specially with futafel. futafel would explain some very important differences in her story vs the canon story (how she didn't kick muggs out of her place after the kiss in the canon story. how they haven't been outed by the government yet. that sorta thing. The comic would end after we've had enough sex scenes with our favorite versions of them (im thinking alice/felix, puma aldo and human fel, milf fel, aldo with an action-hank beard), the event coming to an end after a weekend, and everyone walking through portals back home, promising to meet together again next year! I'd also like to draw each page in a different technique, sorta how i drew the webcomic way back then, changing aesthetics each page.
Kenno Arkkan
2024-11-01 18:55:54 +0000 UTCOh I completely forgot about that comic ! The futa injections could be the prototype of what will be the mods shop, based on Alex research ! Could either be Bonnie is the origin of it, or Alex wanted to go even harder after that because of her ego and we end with the mod shop decades later, that's for a future comic, but that link gives a lot of possibility for future story ! I don't know how far in the future the Mod Shop is, but I like the idea that it could be it's origin story ! My idea if more focused on the Den and the couples we see rarely together, but I like that link !
Huldinha
2024-11-01 18:39:58 +0000 UTCi adore how indepth this story is dinha, thank you so much!! (and double anal is excellent!). What bonnie develops could be the "mods" used on that sketch comic i made about sci-fi modification serums you inject for temporal modifications :D it would be a great way to connect both ideas, the futa injection and the mods into a cohesive concept.
Kenno Arkkan
2024-11-01 18:26:39 +0000 UTCMango science (?) : Futa Kit 2.0 Participants : Bonnie, Alex , Soph, Mary, Bravo, Pawsy, Green and October(we go with the "canon" couple, with the futa versions of the characters that are in AH) -Starts with Bonnie wanting to improve Alex's futa serum to be easily reversible, easier to use and searching for test subject, with Bonnie acting like a TV ad announcer with everyone not getting why she acts like that, basically barging in couple's bedroom umprompted (Bonnie's speech could be something like "Have you ever wanted to join the "Futa club" but a peculiart Fox keeps everything to herself ? Well hope no more, because Carrots Corp comes to you !") -First part and subjects would be Alex and Soph in the middle of a fucking session, Alex yell at Bonnie (unimpressed) because she got disturbed right before cumming and is being blue balled, Bonnie present the product, Alex start acting more arrogant because she have full faith in her original product, complete mood shift once Soph gets her dick and that bonnie reveal it's easily reversible AND can be mass produced, the scene serves as a straightforward showcase with Soph being very eager to "return the favor" to Alex (she could even get a canine one to double that) who begrudgingly admit to be turned on by it (could even be turned on by the idea of being the knotted one) -Second part and subjects are Mary and Bravo in the middle of Bravo "watermelon session", they just give a "Bonbon we talked about door, knocking and boundaries..." when she barged in, Bonnie does her speach a second time but more directed at non-futa couple this time, giving Mary the shot, and a horsecock resting on a very eager Bravo's face who will gets the full nelson of her life -Third part and subjects are Pawsy and Green, getting woke up while cuddling and being grumpy about it, Bonnie does her speech again but this time more targetted at toy users, insisting on time gain in cleaning and pleasure increase, as well as the possibility of the partner being even more "special" while the shots gives Pawsy a barbed Feline cock, and Green a double humanoid ones (the side to side kind) the vibe is more romantic and lovey-dovey with them starting with a sandwich frotting, a 69 and taking turn on each others ass (Optionnal since I'm not sure if Kenno's okay with it, but Paws could get double analed solo by Green) -Fourth part and subject is October, either being the person Bonnie was testing her speech on all along, or appearing out of nowhere, loving the idea of not having the futa kit "locked in a selfish vixen hoard" and finally having access to it, getting back the Tentacle cock she had in the Alien AH. She tests it on Bonnie herself and gets to try all her holes, once she's done, Bonnie gets her own shot and bunny pounds our favourite squid new prostate as her showcase conclusion. -Last part, is Bonnie showing the reversal process starting with herself, and the subjects giving their feedbacks, the pros and cons, if they prefer no dick, keeping it like Alex, and the different in betweens For example : Pawz could like the conveniency of not having to use a dildo and have a more "living" experience (and finally "having tried her girl's ass "for real" ") while also not needing the toy cleaning phase that can now be replace by a simple shower Green could prefer for only Pawz to have a dick, since having two feels a little weird and overwhelming for her, but does like the uniqueness of Pawsy's one Bravo and Mary could love the experience and Mary could comment that "It's tempting to keep it forever but being able to get it away afterward is a great perk with all the blood it needs, even though they'll indeed think about it" October would obviously love to keep it forever Soph sees it as a glorified dildo feels good either way, and Alex begrudgingly admit that it's indeed an improved version, and that she'd like Soph to keep it from time to time (and a bonus could be Fel and Mugger being mad to not be "special" anymore as a final joke and being especially mad about Pawsy and Mary stepping on their turf) Little EDIT : As Kenno mentionned in comment, it could be the origin story of the Mod Shop (who could end being the finality of Bonnie's research, or Alex trying to "heal" her ego) As said it's more to be focused on the couples life (that we rarely see together D:) and how it can improves their sex life, but I think both ideas can coexist very well !
Huldinha
2024-11-01 18:00:55 +0000 UTC
