AH39 begins, what's next?
Added 2024-11-15 19:13:15 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, throw likes to those you're ok with.
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Well *I* do remember ! Aha ! More seriously, works better than what I was gonna post, giving another page before Bonnie barge in, is better paced rather than her immediately going, and the flashback is a nice touch ! o/ (I'm also keeping the pose I had in mind for the main scene, it might even work better that way !)
Huldinha
2024-11-15 19:42:11 +0000 UTCSo, my idea for next page is to jump to a flashback, all the way back to after-hours 2. I think this is is necessary because our most important plot device in the story is from a comic from 10 or so years ago xD I can't count on readers knowing what alex's special juice is. So, just a few frames of the old comic showing alex injecting herself and growing her shlong. Then back to the present with alex and soph in bed, soph naked and lying on her back, with Alex kneeling on top of her, huge boner popping off her leotard, small syringe in hand. then a quick succession of small frames, they'd start smoochin, alex eating soph out, then alex penetrates soph. this won't be the main sex scene yet so i mostly need to push the scene along for bonnie to come in. last frame could be alex like "uuuunngg im gonna knot, im gonna knot!!!" only for bonnie to burst the door open.
Kenno Arkkan
2024-11-15 19:31:45 +0000 UTC
