New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages
Added 2022-08-24 08:41:51 +0000 UTCHeyo!
Been a while. All this time I've been fighting my own incompetency to make something decent looking.
Hope you like the new suit! I was trying to "modernize" it to feature in the comic that I want to make.
I also made 2 pages of what it might look like. It's not from an actual comic and there is no text. I was testing the waters with the style that I want to incorporate.
Tell me what you think about it!
The hardest part for me will probably be the writing, and not the art. Literally have no experience and I don't want to write just some dumb horny shit. Even though it will probably still end up that way.
Das it, for now, Thank you all as usual!
Comments
My god I canβt believe Iβm just seeing this. I absolutely love the redesigning you did to her suit. If they make a Spider Gwen 2099 comic, this would definitely need to be the suit. Bravo Guilty Bravo. ππππ
General Amador
2022-08-31 02:38:57 +0000 UTCThis is a nice redesign, good art speaks for it self so don' worry too much over the dialogue.
Kay Bee Baby
2022-08-30 19:33:20 +0000 UTCAmazing work. Love the suit. When I first saw it I got Spider-Man PS4 vibes. The knuckles are very reminiscent of that game's suit.
Landon Franklin
2022-08-26 11:10:43 +0000 UTCcan't wait to see the finished animation
Chupacabra King
2022-08-25 13:09:36 +0000 UTCPaterson is crashing when I try to view images 4 or 5
mike hawk
2022-08-25 00:26:07 +0000 UTCShit is dope, respectfully
D-Kirby
2022-08-24 23:41:33 +0000 UTCLooking Great!
David isBrosif
2022-08-24 22:26:10 +0000 UTCGwen looks smoking hot! For the dialogue, don't worry too much. Something light to go with the naughtyness is more than enough. π
TimeZero
2022-08-24 18:48:44 +0000 UTCWriting wise. Some tips would be to look at erotica and find out what you like.
PartyOn111
2022-08-24 17:37:49 +0000 UTCGwen is the Cutest Hottie, maybe ever? π€ππ
SPARK352
2022-08-24 14:01:12 +0000 UTCThank you for your feedback. I agree with pretty much everything. Of course I don't plan to make top level drama, but the funniness/wittiness still require some skill to pull off.
Guilty
2022-08-24 09:06:09 +0000 UTCShe's Gorgeous π₯°β€οΈ She is Magnificent filled with Cock π€€π€€
SPARK352
2022-08-24 09:04:50 +0000 UTCDon't worry if the comic's dialogue is cliched or silly, many of the best comic's are. And no offence intended, but I doubt anyone will be reading it expecting V for Vendetta or The Court of Owls level quality. Unless you're planning on making some more mainstream, SFW comics, or making comics a regular thing, I'd recommend using a hentai comic artist like Markydaysaid as a guide, and mostly keeping the dialogue funny and lighthearted. Most of the people who read it will be there for the smut, not the story.
Son of Odin
2022-08-24 08:54:57 +0000 UTC
