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New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages

Heyo!
Been a while. All this time I've been fighting my own incompetency to make something decent looking.
Hope you like the new suit! I was trying to "modernize" it to feature in the comic that I want to make.

I also made 2 pages of what it might look like. It's not from an actual comic and there is no text. I was testing the waters with the style that I want to incorporate.
Tell me what you think about it!

The hardest part for me will probably be the writing, and not the art. Literally have no experience and I don't want to write just some dumb horny shit. Even though it will probably still end up that way.

Das it, for now, Thank you all as usual!

New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages

Comments

My god I can’t believe I’m just seeing this. I absolutely love the redesigning you did to her suit. If they make a Spider Gwen 2099 comic, this would definitely need to be the suit. Bravo Guilty Bravo. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

General Amador

This is a nice redesign, good art speaks for it self so don' worry too much over the dialogue.

Kay Bee Baby

Amazing work. Love the suit. When I first saw it I got Spider-Man PS4 vibes. The knuckles are very reminiscent of that game's suit.

Landon Franklin

can't wait to see the finished animation

Chupacabra King

Paterson is crashing when I try to view images 4 or 5

mike hawk

Shit is dope, respectfully

D-Kirby

Looking Great!

David isBrosif

Gwen looks smoking hot! For the dialogue, don't worry too much. Something light to go with the naughtyness is more than enough. 😁

TimeZero

Writing wise. Some tips would be to look at erotica and find out what you like.

PartyOn111

Gwen is the Cutest Hottie, maybe ever? πŸ€”πŸ˜πŸ‘

SPARK352

Thank you for your feedback. I agree with pretty much everything. Of course I don't plan to make top level drama, but the funniness/wittiness still require some skill to pull off.

Guilty

She's Gorgeous πŸ₯°β€οΈ She is Magnificent filled with Cock 🀀🀀

SPARK352

Don't worry if the comic's dialogue is cliched or silly, many of the best comic's are. And no offence intended, but I doubt anyone will be reading it expecting V for Vendetta or The Court of Owls level quality. Unless you're planning on making some more mainstream, SFW comics, or making comics a regular thing, I'd recommend using a hentai comic artist like Markydaysaid as a guide, and mostly keeping the dialogue funny and lighthearted. Most of the people who read it will be there for the smut, not the story.

Son of Odin


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