Tier 3 Commission
Most of my posts generally don't involve the male talking (honestly I feel I'm pretty mediocre when it comes to writing dialogue and I cringe myself with some of them which I hope that what I revised is better), but I think I got into the 'zone' for it in this case. The theme and general premise provided does help to an extent.
I don't watch RWBY and never have, but the smug arrogant type feels easier to write with. (Similar to the Pyrrha set from months ago)
Not sure if it helped enhanced the scenes or became cumbersome (I know some people just prefer the female talking or no dialogue at all).
Melvin
2025-05-24 23:22:48 +0000 UTCDonnard
2025-05-24 15:20:51 +0000 UTC