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Creating Games in a Dungeon

I have made Lore/Glossary of the upcoming book. I need your opinions on what to add or change, if some things don't make sense. Write in the comments or like this post if you're satisfied.

Lore

Circulating Aether in the body disrupts the Mana in the body when used, so Martial Arts and Magic abilities cannot be mixed.

Comments

Seems like a good foundation. I like that you restricted your MC to only be able to make things that exist in this fantasy world. It'd be cool if he could hand out prizes based on items from his favorite video games and shows, but at the same time that would probably be way too OP. One suggestion I have is that it might be good if the mc could get dp from mana and/or aura instead of just time spent in the dungeon. If theres some kind of trap that can slowly drain mana out of a person then he could alter it so people can willingly pay mana to play a game. That way he can charge different "prices" for different games

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