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Chapter 470 – Life 120, Age 28, Martial Grandmaster 5

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these explosives had trouble taking out anything more powerful than a mid-level Rank 2 beast. - Might want to change it to Mid-Rank 2 instead of mid-level rank 2. Also maybe change ‘dead disciples’ to something else? Cause even as I read, I thought the disciples were dead and not just pulled from the realm

Merlin King

Not that he wants to use in the open with the Bureau tracking everything. He goes through the limitations it has/would have when he does it in the previous realm

abstract_melon

Thanks again for pushing through and getting another chapter out!

Michael Ferguson

This could have been two chapters.

Michael Ferguson

Can't Fang use time loops to buy extra stuff?

Michael Ferguson

Alright, thanks. I'll take a look. What I was trying to say, is basically a continuous horde without pausing. Animals of the same type are groups together, but there's no real time to rest between them.

Greg Tolley

I was a bit confused by this on my first pass: “Before the antelopes were even halfway to us, a pack of oversized foxes dashed into the canyon. Then, a group of large pangolins. The Disciples used qi techniques to cut down the antelopes before they could reach us, but by the time they were all dead, another two packs of animals had already entered the canyon.” However, reading it a second time, I think I get it. There are now 4 beast tides after the antelope to deal with? Something about this is just a little unclear. Consider editing.

Adam Baldwin

Tftc

Black Rose

Got the wu fire it looks life

Nick Pincus

Thanks for the chapter!

Misiu


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