Update[WIP]Ruined Idol
Added 2024-09-15 15:52:11 +0000 UTCFinally, I finish drawing the sketch and include the text (well, it's rough and still on Bahasa), but I make progress!
A simple question, did we must make her nude? (so like step by step, not only on the final page, or keep and continue the progress) If you think some part is weird, just tell me so I can evaluate it and maybe fix it? (I just want to know what you'll think.)
Comments
thanks, this my first comic, so i hope you enjoying it!
AkangBuser
2024-09-15 21:27:22 +0000 UTCI think the flow of the comic works well. Nothing felt immediately off while reading it.
Shiki173
2024-09-15 17:53:59 +0000 UTC
