extra pages are fluff text and xray
just a quick note, i was about to delay this because i wasnt satisfied with the proportions of the last page and had to redo them, but i got it done in time :)
youll notice in the last page compared to the wip, ozen was far more muscular and older looking, the symmetry was really off, elise's hips didnt translate well when coloring, and issues with size difference across the board. it was for me to tell on the wip but when doing finishing touches, it looked really off. its been a problem of mine when it came to proportions in general and trying to stay more consistent.
the new last page, the differences are i had to slightly shrink him, he still has some muscle but not as intense to keep his size, and corrected hip-to-ass ratio. i hope you guys like the end result though!
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