Commentary: Steal This Side Quest (Elliwyn)
Added 2021-10-08 15:00:07 +0000 UTCHere's September's commentary — I apologize for the delay!! This one is all about the first in my new series, "Steal This Side Quest," featuring Elliwyn the healer! Check it out here.
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That makes me SO happy to hear because to be honest, I don't have very many personal relationships with people who have been involved in the military, so it's mostly guesswork — I'm so glad to hear that it feels natural for the setting!
Ginny Di
2021-10-09 20:14:26 +0000 UTCLoved the video, and your running commentary throughout. Your insights into the character paired with the writing and development bring the characters to new heights. As one who has worked in a military combat field hospital, Elli's mixture of humor and calm while she's in her element, mixed with anxiety and uncertainty when dealing with events (undead) outside her control is spot on. She reminds me of several medic friends I have served with. Sharing this with them! Thank you!!
2021-10-09 02:53:32 +0000 UTCAlso, just a comment on the commentary: Yes, a DM can run with a brief outline and develop a character, but as a DM, you can never have too much information or detail. Please don't hesitate to fully develop NPCs if you want. I'll probably change some things to suit my game and style, but the more details you give, the more I will be able to find that I can use.
Rick Smathers
2021-10-08 22:18:01 +0000 UTCI've got plans for this side quest! Eventually by party is going to end up in the Domains of Dread and I'm going to base a Domain off of an army being caught in a forever war and have the party stumble in.
Rick Smathers
2021-10-08 21:57:03 +0000 UTC
