Animation Preview *FEEDBACK NEEDED* - Scene's 1 through 7
Added 2018-04-24 14:20:03 +0000 UTCHeya all. I don't normally do this but wanted to see what you all thought of the animation so far. Please help me spot out anything that doesn't look right.
Also, dynamics (hair,balls,boob movements) may not be turned on for all scenes but feel free to point out those issues if you see them.
Here are a couple of fixes I think I need to add:
- Add Maggie in the background behind Mary in the opening scene.
- Adding in this dialog for Mary while Maggie is air humping, "I didn't mean to cum inside her pussy babe"
- Fix Mary's lip sync during (fuck any hole you want dialog)
Comments
good catch I will fix her tongue. Im not sure about mary getting hard though. she is a little worried right now that she hurt bella.
Agent Red Girl
2018-04-27 00:47:36 +0000 UTCMaggies tongue seems too wide when she sticks it out, maybe more pointed/teasing. (Suggestion) maybe add a twitching/bounce/slight hardening to Marys cock when she is talking to bella?
Darth Pax
2018-04-27 00:02:28 +0000 UTCawesome keep up the good work cant wait for the 3rd part!!!
james
2018-04-25 01:11:22 +0000 UTCthanks james! I fixed that :) she actually isnt in the camera anymore until mary turns to look at her.
Agent Red Girl
2018-04-25 01:09:33 +0000 UTChappy to help!
james
2018-04-25 00:50:25 +0000 UTCGood call, didn't notice until you pointed it out.
Frank Celestino
2018-04-24 23:41:48 +0000 UTCThe second taunt that maggie does, it doesn't show her left arm up mimicking a blowjob. Is that on purpose?
james
2018-04-24 23:30:00 +0000 UTCOk I might adjust it a little to make it shorter! It will play better once I have Mary's line in there too
Agent Red Girl
2018-04-24 20:25:26 +0000 UTCvery nice work, only issue i see is the second taunt went on for a few seconds too long
Michael Fox
2018-04-24 20:09:22 +0000 UTCOh yeah... Maggie is not going to be happy about it for sure lol she is going to be upset =) Maggie doesnt really like Bella all that much and is afraid Bella is going to "steal" her away or something which is part of the reason Maggie approached Mary.
Agent Red Girl
2018-04-24 18:24:10 +0000 UTCLooks great to me. And I love the way Bella shakes her head when Maggie is mocking her. But I wonder if it doesn't backfire on Maggie as if you wanted to you could show Maggie's taunting expression turn to one of shock/dumbfounded when Mary tells Bella she can fuck her in any hole she wants. Or perhaps that was Maggie's plan all along? Either way it's great.
bigwiggy
2018-04-24 18:18:33 +0000 UTCEverything looks fantastic! Cant wait to see the whole thing. Definitely looking forward to the larger movie project you mentioned as well! Keep it up!
2018-04-24 17:38:44 +0000 UTCThanks =)
Agent Red Girl
2018-04-24 14:51:47 +0000 UTC
