Animation *Draft* - Foreskin Play *Need Feedback*
Added 2018-09-25 22:08:53 +0000 UTCOk so here is a little clip of Mary playing with her foreskin a little while Maggie and Bella figure out what they are going to do to get her aroused again.
Direct Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/wvz8h0xibxhshaw/Scene9.mp4?dl=0
Test Frame:
So, I like the idea of this but it just doesn't look right to me... I had her pull her foreskin out a little then spread it again but i guess that doesnt really seem correct? Maybe I should just have her keep her foreskin spread open or not pull on it at all?
I dunno, what do you think? Let me know.
AML4 - Animation Progress = 20% (+5%), Rendering = 10% (+1%)
- 40-530 - (Need Render) Intro
- Scene1 = (Done) Mary, please say something
- Scene2 = (Done) Mary is frustrated
- Scene3 = (Done) Bellas first time
- Scene4 = (Done) Cut to Maggies reaction
- Scene5 = (Done) Mary isnt even hard
- Scene6 = (Done) Bella pleads
- Scene7 = (Done) Maggie can help!
- 970-1260 = Rendering - Good idea!
- 1250-1400 = (Need Render) Mary getting warmed up (Draft)
- Up Next: Ass eating
- Up Next: Bella tells Maggie to push the cum out
- Up Next: Maggie pushing/shooting cum onto Bella's face
- Up Next: Bella dirty talk
- Up Next: Mary stroking + needs moar
- Up Next: Maggie awkwardly declares she has to pee
- Up Next: Bella looks at Mary then at Maggie
- Up Next: Pee on my face... :(
- Up Next: Maggie wtf?
- Up Next: Bella porn star pee request!
- Up Next: Maggie OK!
- Up Next: Maggie trying to pee
- Up Next: Bella give it to me
- Up Next: Golden Shower
- Up Next: Mary needs moar
- Up Next: Kissing + Cock Snoodling
- Up Next: Bella cums on Maggies cock
- Up Next: Surprise 1
- Up Next: Surprise 2
- Up Next: Surprise 3
- Up Next: Marys turn to cum (I will add more whenIgetclosertothis section)
- Up Next: More to come...
Comments
Keep the foreskin
Virgil Hawkins
2018-10-06 06:18:45 +0000 UTCHot ! Leave the foreskin lol you're doing fine.
Blazingsaddle
2018-10-04 23:21:45 +0000 UTCIs there any plan to circumsize Mary? I personally don’t find Foreskin attractive, but I love erverything else. Also what is the tag for the Discord server?
Thomas
2018-09-30 13:09:31 +0000 UTCI understand! I made a few changes to this section but I will have some foreskin pulling in an upcoming scene
Agent Red Girl
2018-09-26 15:20:43 +0000 UTCI personally think pulling on foreskin is more visually pleasing than spreading it open like that. Spreading it open seems kinda gross and weird. Idk why
Larry Berner
2018-09-26 08:04:35 +0000 UTCIt looks great, as always but I understand your reservations Red. I think the feeling under the foreskin without it being 'lubbed' by pre-cum or saliva could be painful. The head of a cock under the foresskin is sensitive. I think it would work better for Mary if she gripped the tip of the foresking between thumb and forefinger and tugged and so pulled on her cock making it longer but still flaccid and then pulling the foreskin back so that one of her girls could lick the head. Then her fingers under the foreskin could start to arouse her.
Futanari Fan
2018-09-26 06:45:17 +0000 UTCFirst, anything Mary does is very erotic. However it would be more like what someone would do with foreskin play to pull it back exposing the head then again forward covering it, like a long slow masturbation. It not only looks erotic but feels good. A few strokes like that and she will grow and get hard. That's hot!
Caman
2018-09-26 04:20:19 +0000 UTCIt's sounds good
Shannon Boyack
2018-09-26 02:19:48 +0000 UTCLooks good to me!
raxim.us
2018-09-26 02:17:37 +0000 UTCIt looks fine to me but if you want to try something else maybe you could have Mary pull on her foreskin and really stretch it out, then do the reverse by peeling it back and exposing her cock? Also just want to say the texture of Mary's balls in the test frame is perfect as you can see all the tiny little wrinkles.
bigwiggy
2018-09-26 01:35:22 +0000 UTCHmm, the animation looks good to me, not really sure what else to add other than that 😅. The preview image looks fantastic and Mary is so damned sexy in that pose 😍😍😍. I love the subtle glow of her green eyes, the way she sensually lounges on the bed, breasts moving with the twist of her torso, with her hand resting against her smooth thigh. The lighting as it shines on and accentuates her thigh, stomach and balls looks great too. Damn fine work once again 😄
Ciarán M
2018-09-26 00:20:30 +0000 UTCLooks hot
Peppa
2018-09-25 23:27:53 +0000 UTC
