Animation Draft - Feedback Needed / Progress = 30% (+3%)
Added 2018-10-05 15:49:21 +0000 UTCLINK TO PREVIEW: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ztfo60ojjbizhqf/Scene14.mp4?dl=0
This is just a DRAFT but I wanted to get some opinions on a couple things. The camera angle I am using will focus on the cum shooting out of Maggie. However, I am thinking of re-rendering the same scene from another angle to show the splatter on Bella's face. Would you like to see both? Or just one? The other thought I had was showing the cum shooting out of Maggie from Bella's POV.
My original idea is to focus on Maggie's ass then in the next scene show Bella's face, with cum all over it, and her scooping it up and maybe leaning forward to clean up Maggies ass and pussy a little.
Couple of additional notes:
The "easiest/fastest" thing would be to just do Bella's POV followed up by the "aftermath". The reason is because when I do the cum shooting simulation, I will not have to make Bella's face a collision object. This alone will probably save 1-2 days of simulation time.
The "hardest/longest" thing to do would be to render 2 camera angles. 1 showing the cum shooting out and 1 showing the cum landing on Bella's face. This would require double the rendering and double/triple the simulation time.
Also, I am not 100% confident in how the movement looks in this section. What do you think? Does everything look ok or should I change/add something?
AML4 - Animation Progress = 30% (+3%), Rendering = 16% (+0% POV Scene almost done rendering!!!)
- 40-530 - (Need Render) Intro
- Scene1 = (Done) Mary, please say something
- Scene2 = (Done) Mary is frustrated
- Scene3 = (Done) Bellas first time
- Scene4 = (Done) Cut to Maggies reaction
- Scene5 = (Done) Mary isnt even hard
- Scene6 = (Done) Bella pleads
- Scene7 = (Done) Maggie can help!
- Scene8 = (Done) Good idea!
- Scene9 = (Done) Mary getting warmed up (Draft)
- Scene10 = (Done) Ass eating 1
- 1500-1700 = (STILL Rendering OMG) Ass eating POV
- 1800-2100 = (Need Render) Ass eating from Mary's POV
- 2070-2195 = (Need Render) Bella tells Maggie to push the cumout
- Up Next: Maggie pushing/shooting cum onto Bella's face
- Up Next: Bella dirty talk
- Up Next: Mary stroking + needs moar
- Up Next: Maggie awkwardly declares she has to pee
- Up Next: Bella looks at Mary then at Maggie
- Up Next: Pee on my face... :(
- Up Next: Maggie wtf?
- Up Next: Bella porn star pee request!
- Up Next: Maggie OK!
- Up Next: Maggie trying to pee
- Up Next: Bella give it to me
- Up Next: Golden Shower
- Up Next: Mary needs moar
- Up Next: Kissing + Cock Snoodling
- Up Next: Bella cums on Maggies cock
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 1
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 2
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 3
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 4
- Up Next: Mary face fucking Maggie (I will add more when I get closer to this section)
- Up Next: Maggie ass fucking Mary
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 1
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 2
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 3
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 4
Comments
I think 2 camera angles would be worth the time & effort. The movement looks good to me, the only thing I'd suggest adding is that every time Maggie pushes grool and semen should be leaking from her pussy & cock respectively. Maybe you could even use that as a lead up to Bella cleaning Maggie up as Bella would lower her head and catch a long rope of grool or semen in her mouth and sort of slurp it up as she follows it back to it's source? Anyway just an idea.
bigwiggy
2018-10-05 21:46:59 +0000 UTCTotally agree. The camera switch would be great. I do really like your idea Red of scooping up the remainder to eat it!
Kennyannydenny
2018-10-05 18:40:24 +0000 UTCHmm I might do a blend like this or something similiar... and Well, Bella is trying to put on a show for Mary so she will be smiling AND yes, she will scoop up the remainder of her cum and eat it =)
Agent Red Girl
2018-10-05 18:10:56 +0000 UTCI'd recommend 2 cameras, but with a bit of a compromise. Have the first spurt or two as shown in the example, but then switch camera angles for the remaining spurt to show it landing on Bella. But then... the big question will be, what will Bella's reaction be? One of discust? One of erotic pleasure? Will she wipe her face and eat it? That's where the second angle continues the story.
glrider
2018-10-05 16:35:46 +0000 UTCHi Red, I've gone for rendering 2 camera angles. I know this will take more time but worth the effort and the wait I think. Is it possible to do split screen so we see both angles simultaneously. WHat ever you go for no doubt it will look great!
Futanari Fan
2018-10-05 16:09:56 +0000 UTCAlthough it would take longer, I do really like the idea of having 2 camera angles, getting to see the cum shooting out as well as getting a full view of how it lands and splashes across Bella's face, the second angle being the extra sexy one for me personally 😍😍😍. As for this animation preview, it looks good to me, I like the way Maggie's body raises and lowers with her back arching as she does so, while the way her asshole opens and closes looks right.
Ciarán M
2018-10-05 16:08:54 +0000 UTCI think the angle shown is mostly ok, but if the angle was down and to the right just a little bit, and a little wider of a shot, it would come across better imo. IDK if that's exactly what kind of feedback you wanted but those are my thoughts.
Erica
2018-10-05 15:56:54 +0000 UTCSorry if this poll is a little confusing in anyway. My brain is a little fried. Lemme know if you have any questions!
Agent Red Girl
2018-10-05 15:51:05 +0000 UTC
