Animation Preview - Need Feedback/Ideas + Progress = 65%
Added 2018-10-31 18:20:03 +0000 UTCHello! So, I working on the "golden shower scene". As of now, its unfinished but I would still love any feedback or ideas you have for this section before I finalize it. Feel free to nit pick or whatever... I just want to make sure this looks good =)
Direct Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/tvud0slrw9o1a31/Scene28.mp4?dl=0
I think I am going to add in Maggie "pulling" on her penis a little toward the end. Also, I kinda think maybe Bella is moving around a little too much but I dunno... let me know your thoughts.
Also, we are nearing the first surprise section and I cant wait to get started on it. I will be sharing the animation previews for it so everyone will know whats happening.
AML4 - Animation Progress = 65% (+6%), Final Rendering = 33%
- 40-530 - (Need Render) Intro
- Scene 1 through Scene 14 = (Done)
- 2195-2500 = (Need Render) Bella's face during creampiefireworks
- Scene 16 = (Done)
- Up Next: Bella cleaning up Maggie's ass, pussy, cum eating and dirty talk
- Scene 18 = (Done)
- 3100-3300 = (Need Render) Oh my god Bella look at her nuts
- 3330-3500 = (Need Render) Maggie awkwardly declares shehas to pee
- Scene 21 = (Done)
- 3505-3750 = (Need Render) Pee on my face... :(
- 3800-3990 = (Need Render) Maggie wtf? Seriously?
- 3400-3720 = (Need Render) Bella porn star pee request!
- 3720-4100 = (Need Render) Maggie says OK + small surprise
- 3800-4100 = (Need Render) Maggie trying to pee
- 4100-4700 = (Need Simulation) Bella's Golden Shower
- Up Next: Kissing + Cock Snoodling
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 1
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 2
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 3
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 4
- Up Next: Mary face fucking Maggie (I will add more when I getcloser to this section)
- Up Next: Maggie ass fucking Mary
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 1
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 2
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 3
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 4
Comments
I really like this. More please
Teecee
2018-11-07 07:17:41 +0000 UTCThe orgasms and cumshot will follow shortly after =)
Agent Red Girl
2018-11-01 20:18:30 +0000 UTCI think you have a solid gameplan... I'm not much for watersports, but I suspect this will work for those who are. I also like your idea of a bit of stroking at the end, maybe even some massive orgasms/ cum shots to finish it out?
Arthur Ziskey
2018-11-01 08:08:05 +0000 UTCLooks like Bella's really getting into it.
bigwiggy
2018-11-01 04:37:10 +0000 UTCI think Bella's movement is fine/natural. Think of what its like to wait in anticipation for something So special. Seconds seem to take an hour...very hard to sit still!!!!
terry mcneil
2018-10-31 22:18:03 +0000 UTCThanks Red, good to hear
bobby stronzheim
2018-10-31 21:19:46 +0000 UTCHeya bobby! Yes, we will see plenty of squirting and I do plan to add some more lactation stuff in as well. There may not be anymore lactation stuff in AML but I have a super awesome lactation scene planned for Amys Big Wish!
Agent Red Girl
2018-10-31 21:17:06 +0000 UTCOh and also, most likely not in this scene, but are we going to see some more squirting while cumming and/or lactation stuff? :o
bobby stronzheim
2018-10-31 21:12:52 +0000 UTCOk sounds good =) I can add in the tongue fairly easily! You wont really see Maggies head in this once it renders but I can add a relieved look to her face in the next scene
Agent Red Girl
2018-10-31 21:10:48 +0000 UTCIf i were to be a nitpicker/idea generator I'd say maybe have bella stick her tongue out for some of it? The tugging as others have said would be a great addition as well. Bella twitching is also excellent since it is what I consider part of "your style" which is a good thing! maybe have Maggie tilt her head back a tad too in relief. That being said this scene is going to be amazing and everything you've done so far has been top notch. Keep it up :D
bobby stronzheim
2018-10-31 20:54:51 +0000 UTCI love this, looks awesome. I agree on the pulling for Maggie but Bella seems good, really love that you implemented the throbbing of her penis!
Kennyannydenny
2018-10-31 20:03:24 +0000 UTCOh my god... this is surprisingly very, very hot! 😹😻😻😻😻 The way Bella's cock twitches and pulses throughout, ending with her starting to stroke it and smiling up at Maggie are just so sexy to me! Personally, I think that Bella's movements here all look perfectly fine and that she's moving around a natural amount, especially given what's going to be happening in the final animation 😹. Great work on this one, Red (seriously, so hot! 🔥🔥😻😻) Looking forward to seeing more 😸
Ciarán M
2018-10-31 19:45:00 +0000 UTCI agree with Maggie needing to be pulling on her penis, maybe to get the last drop out? Bella seems fine to me particularly the twitching.
2018-10-31 19:14:32 +0000 UTCLooks good thus far however will be a bit easier to say once a fluid simulation is added so you can see it in comparison to bellas reactions.
Jeffrey Adams
2018-10-31 18:31:45 +0000 UTCI love how her penis is twitching!
baby ryan
2018-10-31 18:24:19 +0000 UTC
