Animation Preview - Position 2 - Feedback?
Added 2019-03-25 21:07:48 +0000 UTCHellooo! So, I have put a lot of work into this scene and added a LOT of details... please take a look at let me know what you think. Keep in mind, neither of these angles are the actual length of the animation, they are just a portion of it.
Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/xp5s4tooedzxcyk/Scene14DRAFT2.mp4?dl=0
Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1iTQbrt3IVhrb3GPVPUwE5MJhqC92GUWe
It was suggested to slow it down but I kinda already had the primary motion down so I wasnt able to but for the final sex scene I will offer up a variety of different "speeds". Something I kinda like a lot is that I added in some stomach contractions for Maggie when she is flexing her penis. I think it looks really nice personally.
I added in a little "ahegao" face for Mary... is it too much?
Anywho, please take a look and provide any feedback you have to improve this section.
Notes (details to still add):
- Add grool/precum to Maggie
- Add a little saliva/tears going down Maggies face
- Add facial expressions for Maggie
- Add in eye blinks and darts
Animation Progress 55%
- Scene 1 -10 - (Done)
- Scene 11 (Done)
- Scene 12 (Done)
- Scene 14 (Done)
- Scene 15 (206-434) WIP - Face fucking position #2
- Sceen 16 (246-434) WIP - Face fucking position angle 2
- Scene 17 - Bella's kitchen tantrum part 2
- Scene 18 - Face fucking position #3 start
- Scene 19 - Face fucking position #3 ultra hard
- Scene 20 - Face fucking Marys cumming part 1
- Scene 22 - Face fucking Mary cumming part 2
- Scene 23 - I love you!
- Scene 24 - Can I stick my dick in your butt?
- Scene 25 - MAGGIE LYNN??
- Scene 26 - Ok ok just dont be rough with me
- Scene 27 - *NEW* - Maggie eating out Marys ass, pussy, clit
- Scene 28 - Bella's kitchen tantrum cum shot
- Scene 29 - Anna sees Bella jacking off on the chicken
- Scene 30 - Maggie cums
- Scene 31 - Bella walks in on Maggie inside Marys ass (ORIGINAL ENDING)
- Scene Bonus (MAYBE) - Mary - Wow Bella this chicken is great! (ALTERNATIVE ENDING)
Comments
I second this, that's what makes your animation stand out, you're very talented and make it look so real.
Dominic walker
2019-03-26 07:00:05 +0000 UTClooks great!
bigwiggy
2019-03-26 01:01:33 +0000 UTCMaybe as a minor addition, add motion to the actual squeezing of Maggie's breasts, like what you did in AMML 1? As opposed to them kinda resting there?
Cwolf
2019-03-26 00:53:43 +0000 UTCLove the facial expression, hoping to see some of that "mind erase" type look for Maggie as well. Enjoy her hand positioning on Maggie. If I'm critique anything, the motion could be a little more erratic and forceful on some thrusts with a slight pause on impact to show the progression of intensity with Mary's facial reaction. But that's certainly minor.
nurvzy
2019-03-25 23:05:37 +0000 UTCWorks for me..
glrider
2019-03-25 23:00:34 +0000 UTCFantastic! I love everything htat you have done here. Can't wait to hear the audio.
BunnyRabbit
2019-03-25 22:17:13 +0000 UTCOh wow, I really love how this is going to turn out! I really like the breast grab and the ahegao looks fine by me.
Kennyannydenny
2019-03-25 21:36:58 +0000 UTCOh this is very nice! π»π»π»π»π» All of those extra touches like the jiggling of Mary's breasts and ass, Maggie's stomach sucking in as her cock pulses, the motion of Mary's hair, how her fingers grip Maggie's breasts are absolutely amazing! And I just noticed that Maggie's cock and balls jiggle too as Mary thrusts (and dear god! The way her balls tighten as her cock rises is just too hot! π₯π₯π₯) As for Mary's expression, I'm actually not all that familiar with the "ahegao" face, it's an interesting expression for sure! πΉ In all seriousness, the transition from Mary's insanely sexy smile to her eyes then rolling back and her tongue falling out is very well done and the way she throws her head back with her eyes up as she continues to thrust is super hot. It's so obvious that you have put a tonne of work into this scene as it is just jam-packed with the detail! Just as packed as Maggie's throat actually π Oh and an obvious detail that I enjoy is how Maggie's whole body moves back and forth as Mary thrusts into her, made all the better by the stomach contracting and seeing the upper bones of her hips pushing against the skin. Damn fine work on this one, Red! πππππ
CiarΓ‘n M
2019-03-25 21:16:57 +0000 UTC
