Chapter 54
Added 2019-10-04 20:49:04 +0000 UTCJust Carten things.
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And of course that he can make them smarter
Kemizle
2019-10-05 22:45:06 +0000 UTCBut isn’t rain using his iff aura? This should be the effects before he got iff to10...hopefully the horse develops in a way so rain can know that getting a pet to help in combat is an option
Kemizle
2019-10-05 22:44:39 +0000 UTCYa the horse is smarter then Carten, he should spend more time around Rain when he is using Winter so he can benefit from over-mana
Melnik5
2019-10-05 15:40:11 +0000 UTCSo glad I decided to read the other comments before posting. This is basically my take as well, I can't really find any faults with the story other than the slow pace that it's going at. That makes it frustrating when you get a chapter that doesn't seem to progress the story at all. It's great world building but carten has already shown us that he's a big guy with a heart of gold. As for the horse pov, that was a lot more interesting.
L Pedersen
2019-10-05 09:31:25 +0000 UTCNo.
L Pedersen
2019-10-05 09:25:20 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Dust was interesting but Carten was not.
Joshua Little
2019-10-05 07:03:28 +0000 UTCI thought the horse was filler to until the end when I realized it was getting more intelligent because of rain, Just imagine what would happen if he gets a pet
RanaSuilep
2019-10-05 04:41:40 +0000 UTCThis feels like a comic relief filler chapter except for the interaction at the end. Especially the horse part... but hopefully this goes somewhere.
Chymor
2019-10-05 03:44:39 +0000 UTC+1 for Dust. Would read more about the horse.
Imp
2019-10-05 01:36:33 +0000 UTCThis was nice, but I think I would have preferred a regular chapter. Suggestion: Make Carten say "Never should have come here!"
Loipers
2019-10-05 00:53:33 +0000 UTCpov chapters feel bloating when a story advances this slowly especially when we already have multiple characters explaining their viewpoint even if we dont see it from their view.
Faruel
2019-10-05 00:37:48 +0000 UTCI almost want a story about a horse now. ;p Dust is the real main character, not Rain.
RanaSuilep
2019-10-04 23:55:24 +0000 UTCEhh didnt do much for me, POV chaps just frustrate me if its a slow release. This did at least progress the story right at the end with a new bit of trouble rearing its head. Also a hint about the horse and a potential upgrade ;) honestly I like Dust more than Carten!
Nimps
2019-10-04 23:43:56 +0000 UTCRain's Winter Aura is significantly more powerful than the slave aura. They only go up to level 5 and are basically a passive small boost to your whole army. Rain can boost a normal persons mana regen up to almost low Dynamo levels. He has massive modifiers making it super effective. The horse isn't exactly more intelligent as much as it remembers more than it did before.
Alexander Dupree
2019-10-04 23:34:27 +0000 UTCThanks. Was supposed to be vine. Fixed.
SenescentSoul
2019-10-04 22:31:25 +0000 UTCTypo here. "the head of the vile helpless against the violent whiplash." should be vine, or vile (something)
Critical Hit
2019-10-04 22:21:58 +0000 UTCYou are missing the important question how long untill they kill an level 25+ essence monster and unlock the system for the horse!
Håvard
2019-10-04 22:10:28 +0000 UTC4.5, good chapter, wasn’t that much world building besides over mana affecting animals, one or two tidbits would have been nice
RanaSuilep
2019-10-04 22:05:07 +0000 UTCSo overmana can help animals, particularly smart ones, with figuring out the trick behind our human supremacy? Making fire at will, creating tools, the like? Dear god Rain will doom the world!
Bunny Waffles
2019-10-04 21:52:18 +0000 UTCCarten > https://i.imgur.com/XnAYTVO.png
Vallgar
2019-10-04 21:51:43 +0000 UTCDust is best girl. Carsten can only take second.
Seadrake
2019-10-04 21:01:59 +0000 UTCCarten is great
Alexander Dupree
2019-10-04 20:58:15 +0000 UTCLove it.
Alexander Dupree
2019-10-04 20:58:07 +0000 UTC
