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Added 2023-01-15 06:01:00 +0000 UTCThis one came down to the wire. I need to stop rewriting each chapter three times before I'm happy with it 😅
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Comments
I really loved this chapter. Thought you did a great job with the subtle world building of the city. The guard reaction and description was super cool and vivid too. Great job, the work you put it was absolutely noticed.
Elliot
2023-01-18 16:20:00 +0000 UTCSenescentSoul, do you have an editor? Cause 3 rewrites seems excessive, but I dunno what your process is.
LaughingCoyote
2023-01-16 14:16:42 +0000 UTCThe shards of Purify appear to be separated because Rain is viewing them in 3D. From his experience with the obelisk, any soul room that houses something system related needs to be in 5D at the very least. Easier said than done though, since higher dimensional geometry is probably in the top 10 most confusing things ever.
Starless
2023-01-16 04:29:46 +0000 UTCUnsigned integer error. Experience is instantly set to maximum :P
loimprevisto
2023-01-16 03:47:54 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
SenescentSoul
2023-01-15 17:08:06 +0000 UTCBe interesting to see if a meta magically inverted Experience Well can siphon experience. And if so what would happen if you drain a person to 0? Would they lose a level? Do they lose the stats that came with that particular level? If the consequences of that are too breaking to the system easy workaround is spent experience is solidified and too “heavy” to be siphoned by Experience well without serious specialization.
Nicholas F
2023-01-15 14:26:34 +0000 UTCTypo: "they’d concluded that slime had" <- should be 'that the slime had'
Cirvante
2023-01-15 14:02:32 +0000 UTCGiven that they’re using magic items which pretty much needs awakened to produce, I assume it’s just foreign/unauthorized awakened that are demons.
Chymor
2023-01-15 13:48:44 +0000 UTCI can't imagine any long term culture that exists on this planet that isn't run by awakened. Any religion that makes awakened into Demon's would get stamped out.
David T
2023-01-15 13:36:37 +0000 UTCStrongly agree! Or maybe we both need reading glasses…
Ben
2023-01-15 11:57:38 +0000 UTCI can't help but wonder if Rain would get a laugh out of that... Or at the very least prefer it to 'silverlord' and the dreadful toadying that comes with it.
abowden
2023-01-15 11:52:20 +0000 UTCHey, Ii know this is a personal request, but could you increase the font size one or two times on the PDF? I prefer the PDF to the epub, because the character sheets work right. But on the phone the letters are almost on the edge of readability.
Enkelados
2023-01-15 11:24:55 +0000 UTCDoh! Fixed!
SenescentSoul
2023-01-15 07:17:11 +0000 UTC"Each was a galaxy of information, at once the same and not the same as all the others. Each contained the entire tapestry, but was also no more than a single thread. It made no sense." Make sense if its similar than DNA concept viewing that, each have the whole DNA but express just part of it, like each are "cell" who express a single thread of the whole tapestry that they contain (and so are specialized/different in their use/expression/meaning when "using"/expressing only this part of the DNA and the rest is "dormant") "Granting, one of the turbines shredding itself yesterday didn’t help. Spending the night in the middle of the channel wasn’t exactly part of the plan." I see author added this little part/detail, to "strenghen" this specific aspect in the plausible sense after some reader opinion commented on it in some past chapter and it was feeling a little off/close for him, i like that xD Hardcore culture we get here with the "Demon" and all that
Zarik0
2023-01-15 07:04:17 +0000 UTC"Ameliah filled Rain in via Message " I thought the Warden prevented anyone from Messaging Rain. Or has that been lifted?
Random Information
2023-01-15 06:58:49 +0000 UTClmao, the snek avatar. I kind of hope other people get to see all this silly shite he created in his head one day.
abowden
2023-01-15 06:06:34 +0000 UTC
