4th page line-art
Added 2016-11-08 23:24:33 +0000 UTCObligatory exposition page.
Took me wa-a-ay longer then i expected - mostly because this is basically two pages merged in one. Why draw two pages with talking when you can make just one. Also it were planned as mostly just talking heads (like last two panels), but i decided t throw more body-language in it, which made my work harder too.
But, from this page forward we going right into lewd territory!
It's Kitty's comics, so main focus will be on her adventure, but we get a glimpse of X-23 session with Rachel )
p.s. dialog in this page probably will change a little, I have some remarks and giving aidenke headache with them )
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Like i said don't expect much of Laura, cause it is a Kitty's comics. "Laura's first time" would require whole spin-off comics) but she will got her moment to "shine" in this one also yeah, aidenke don't get enough credit for put up with my shit )
SanePerson
2016-11-09 15:56:17 +0000 UTCYeah, the body language is what makes it work. Makes the exposition sing. Whether it is Kitty's displeasure, or Ilyanna's playful stances. Though the best part is Laura in the final panel. Can't wait to see it in colour
Second of Many
2016-11-09 10:36:05 +0000 UTCThe body-language in this page is amazing, so much fun and sass and cuteness happening all around the page! I know it's going to look stunning in color too - thanks for keeping at this! :D
Aidenke
2016-11-09 01:35:32 +0000 UTCI can't wait.
Justin Lemmon
2016-11-09 01:06:13 +0000 UTCLove it!
David N
2016-11-08 23:56:08 +0000 UTCI'm normally a big lurker, and I'm not even that familiar with the X-Men in general, but I absolutely cannot wait for that glimpse you mentioned. The entire scenario of Laura being taught the ropes for the first time sets my heart aflutter. You and Aidenke make an excellent team; I'm enjoying the anticipation for this story as much as I am watching it come together!
Dove
2016-11-08 23:47:05 +0000 UTC
