Night Games 1st page and a lot of text
Added 2016-09-14 13:42:10 +0000 UTCSuddenly first page arrive! )
I didn't posted line art stage because first page were basically a test field and sustain several changes. For forthcoming pages I would drop some WiP.
It is not a final version - later, when a comics would be almost ready, I would go through all previous pages searching for things to fix. Then i also would drop a High res and all that stuff.
And some current info on project:
-estimated length would be around 10-12 pages, maybe even more. Originally i planned on around nine, but since then I decided that I should draw less crumbled pages , so the number rise a little.
-since it's a lot of a pages, i maybe would split this into two, take a break in the middle, draw some normal pictures and all that stuff. Depends on how tired of this I would be (i don't like to drew same thing for too long).
-as i said before we already established a basic scenario + I have a framing and text for three next pages, and a vision on what to do for rest.
-style slightly changed from previous 4 pages, become a bit more realistic. But not completely realistic, since it wouldn't fit the overall silly tone.
-first 4-6 pages would be given in sacrifice to a story (previous comics ended with too much contenders for one Kitty), then lewd part will start
Comments
Thanks for pointing out! Fixed.
SanePerson
2016-10-18 19:06:45 +0000 UTCAfter 'Limbo-bibmo' was fixed, it now looks like something else has changed - the line on panel 4 "...And you spent *how many* of them in another dimension again..." -there's no time period referenced earlier, so it doesn't make sense anymore. How about changing "i've known her longer than you have..." to "I've known her *years* longer than you have..." Sorry for being picky, I'm loving the continuing story.
EdTheRabbit
2016-10-16 20:32:05 +0000 UTCI may be a little biased, but this first page looks great. Kitty's body and the ropes look incredible, some great expressions - heck of a lot to like here! :)
Aidenke
2016-09-15 00:47:48 +0000 UTCAmazing work
2016-09-14 20:22:31 +0000 UTCThat was the plan. And it's not accidental, though Aidenke is the one responsible for dialogs ) I can't write good dialog in English. And if you, or somebody else, have a suggestion to change something - write and we sincerely take note
SanePerson
2016-09-14 17:42:52 +0000 UTCRemember to distribute the high-res versions of these when they're done! Also you accidentally put "Limbo-bibmo" in Rachel's speech bubble in the middle panel.
Leonineus
2016-09-14 17:10:25 +0000 UTCI love your work. You kick ass!
David N
2016-09-14 14:17:23 +0000 UTCLooking really good so far.
s22132
2016-09-14 13:57:23 +0000 UTC
