Raven Training

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SanePerson

Where can i find the Dropbox :(

Thanks! also for some reasons I like how white gags looks on their place, so i leaved Star gag as it is.

SanePerson

It wasn't taken, as far as i know. And i posted bra version )

SanePerson

The censored version got taken off DA, but I really liked how you added bras as part of the censorship. Any chance you could provide an uncropped variant with the bars? I'd really appreciate it. :)

coredumperror

The only suggestion I might have is giving the ball of Star's gag a color (purple?) as a way to add a little personality to it, but I understand the all-white theme. This turned out looking pretty awesome all together, with a great mirror look at both sides of Raven's fantastic set-up! :D

Aidenke

Part of star outfit, namely her skirt will be disalable in psd. Other slave girls in story, if i ever will draw it, will be just regular OC, at least in current plan.

SanePerson

Wow what a pic! And that left edge makes me wonder who has joined Raven and Starfire in this "training". :)

coredumperror

this look's great! your stuff with raven & starfire are always top notch, and any issues it has have already been pointed out by anon.(most i could add is that i'm not a fan of the lacy frilly bit's on star's outfit, and that's just personal preference.) raven's hair and star's new piercings are the highlights for me, but i can't help but wonder who is the "trainee" who's buttock and foot are visable on the left most edge of the picture?

jo holloway

Thanks! several points can be explained by perspective around reflextion, but most are good remarks and i will see what i can fix )

SanePerson

Really hot scene, thank you! The errors I see are due to the complexity of drawing reflections. The chain from Raven's collar is confusing. It is either swinging to real Raven's right, in which case it should appear between her thighs, or it is swinging towards the mirror in which case it should appear above real Raven's left thigh. Also, real Raven's shoulder is much higher and her torso is leaning further forward than her reflection. Raven is much closer to the mirror than Starfire is, but her reflection is relatively further away. IMO, her reflection should also be closer to the mirror surface and be partially hidden behind her real body. Starfire's has a thick pool of hair is pooled about a foot outwards from her calf, but her reflection has hair ends around her ankle.

Alphax Anon