Action Toys page 27
Added 2024-03-15 12:18:30 +0000 UTCInitial Raven line were: "That bastard didn't deserve such a lavish death..."
2 versions of this page, version 2 were first one, but then I get an idea to light up Star hair while she overemotional, and drew verion 1. But maybe it's a little over the top and not very clear on what happening, so I left both versions. Later on I will pick one =)
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https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fo/mg2bwx23t8xtskk77zz2c/h?rlkey=e8dl6cxapluawl4rhjo1zfva2&dl=0
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I said that I gonna do both Action Toys and Gwens picture together, but currently I rushing to finish this part of a comics, so I can finalize it and post it outside of Patreon and outside of a passworded folder. Then I will focus on Gwens.
One page left, should be even quicker to draw then this one.
Comments
Will she be able to hold it together? ๐ค
bones
2024-03-21 17:17:28 +0000 UTCThe password isnโt working for Dropbox for some reason
Bob Jenkins
2024-03-21 15:46:39 +0000 UTCUPDATE: Gumroad MAY have relented to the point of allowing direct checking account payment for NSFW, just NOT PAYPAL or STRIPE. I need to get back on Twitter to get more details!
Shremedy
2024-03-19 07:18:29 +0000 UTCThe way PPal keeps changing their policies, willy-nilly, is making it almost impossible to remain in compliance. But yeah, do your best. My message is more for fellow Patrons out here, rather than Creators. I'm gearing up to delete my PPal, shifting my payment method here is the first step of that
Shremedy
2024-03-16 17:14:14 +0000 UTCI use Payoneer, but also I planned to do some cleansing of my art posted on patreon, to reduce the chance i can be banned from it
SanePerson
2024-03-16 11:26:48 +0000 UTC๐๐๐๐๐๐: ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐! ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐. IF YOU CAN. Gumroad folded to PAYPAL pressure and banned ALL NSFW ART. Snap of fingers, GONE. You own NOTHING any more! That's 100% of everything I ever bought there! And 100% of everything I buy here! If you reduce the amount of money Paypal brings here, by paying directly, you reduce the amount of leverage PAYPAL has on THIS platform, and maybe keep (fun!) NSFW content alive (unlike poor, doomed Gumroad)
Shremedy
2024-03-16 10:36:14 +0000 UTCyeah, point that goal can be unobtainable by purpose is legit, but storywise it needed to be obtainable and require not that long time (comics where they spend years serving CF would get boring)
SanePerson
2024-03-16 08:00:12 +0000 UTCNice bit there with the negative space on the bottom panel. I see what ya did there ;)
SM
2024-03-15 23:40:28 +0000 UTCMeanwhile, Raven may be punished for stopping when she wasn't told to.
The Mu
2024-03-15 23:33:59 +0000 UTCRavens should subtract 4000 for stopping early ๐
engagecrayfish0
2024-03-15 22:24:50 +0000 UTCI mean to be fair if I was control freak and had starfire giving out blowjobs for 4000 points Iโd make the number quite high ๐
engagecrayfish0
2024-03-15 21:59:43 +0000 UTCFor someone like Control Freak, making the goal unattainable may be the point. Of course, he canโt let it seem unattainable, or else the girls might be harder to manipulate. Maybe he can take away points on a whim. Moving the goal post.
HotDog89
2024-03-15 21:53:58 +0000 UTCI actually think that I need to up her numbers for outstanding performance, else million points would be quite an unobtainable goal
SanePerson
2024-03-15 19:38:11 +0000 UTCAnd I'm glad CF is still alive! ๐ It's too early not to continue enjoying this couple... although, if the A.I. takes care of entertaining/punishing them for a while, I'd bet they'll both miss that little pervert, especially seeing how it's made Star sweat!
TheGag
2024-03-15 17:59:18 +0000 UTCI vote for the 'hair on fire' version โค๏ธโ๐ฅ Maybe if the lowest part of the hair has a light up touch too, will be a little less ambiguous. And if you added an onomatopoeia indicating her "fire up state", like '๐บ๐พ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐บ๐ฏ' or similar, it would be a second indication.
TheGag
2024-03-15 17:53:59 +0000 UTCWait didnโt he say they needed like a million pointsโฆ.carry the 2โฆ..lotta blow jobs ๐
engagecrayfish0
2024-03-15 16:06:13 +0000 UTCMight as well let Starfire live up to her name. She sees stars and feels on fire.
A fan
2024-03-15 14:13:57 +0000 UTCI like the backlight on her hair, itโs a nice, subtle indication of her heightened arousal.
HotDog89
2024-03-15 12:55:53 +0000 UTCNoice!!
Dashole
2024-03-15 12:22:21 +0000 UTCAmazing expressions in this one! Great page^^
Momo Trotro
2024-03-15 12:19:59 +0000 UTC
