Narration Changes?
Added 2015-09-28 02:31:43 +0000 UTCSo, I was thinking about changing up how some of the narration is done in the novel. For example, if someone were to present you with an item, I would use internal dialog with him speaking of obtaining said item. For example..
You - "Oh, he handed me some money."
Instead, I was thinking about just adding some third-person narration so it would really just say...
"You received some money."
What do you guys think? I feel like adding some extra narration instead of having it be just internal dialog could add some extra... meat to the story.
Comments
If you think it would help people get into the story more, then sure do it.
S34N
2015-10-10 17:06:17 +0000 UTCSounds good to me
Rhody
2015-09-28 17:05:41 +0000 UTC
